|Reviews for Jumanji One Half|
| ayujih 4/28/08 . chapter 1
It seems like an odd setup, but I love the execution and flow of the story.
| Michael The-Zorch Haney 4/27/08 . chapter 1
BRAVO! (Sound of uproarious applause)
This is a RARE crossover indeed and excellently written. I read your tirade on your page and I feel your pain. There are lot of very unfriendly people out there, and unfortunately there are even more people who don't seem to comprehend the basic concept of "Constructive Criticism". KOTF are probably the worst and so are Canon Cops. They are the lowest of the low, calling authors names and flaming them rather than giving legitimate and logical reason for why they didn't like the story, nor do they give any suggestions on how to change the story either. In fan fiction the key to success is having an open mind and being able to see the possibilities that others might not see or are willing to accept. Its often the plot concepts that most people don't ever think about that often end up being the most popular, and also draw the greatest ire from the peanut gallery. So, don't you DARE give up writing fan fiction! You can't please all of the people all of the time. This is a lesson I had to learn when I started out doing fan fiction and I've since learned to just ignore the rude and obnoxious artards and focus on the constructive criticism of those with more than three brain cells. From reading this first chapter I can see you are a great writer with loads of potential, it would be a crime if you stopped outright, so hold your head high and be proud of your creativity. You've got a fan in me. :-)
| RPGmastar 2/9/08 . chapter 2
DUDE! AWESOME STORY! You gotta update this along with, Ruroni Ranko and Astrild's Restaurant. There're all great and I've been waiting a long time for the next chap.
| Cylon One 10/4/07 . chapter 2
I'm having such a great time reading this Jumanji/Ranma adventure. Fantastic job letting us see what went on here during this new Jumanji game that got started. You know, I can't help but wonder and hope that someday Ranma will end up playing the magic board game of Zathura. It can happen.
| Fluffy 5/25/07 . chapter 2
To answer the question, a lot of fun.
This could be very interesting, not developed enough to see what you could do with it though.
| drakiss 5/24/07 . chapter 2
I like it hope you keep going
| Hiryo 5/7/07 . chapter 2
Col! Thanks for updating!
And what else to do for Martial Artists then finding more obscured
Fighting styles as well lost legendary styles.
Then again there are always those adventures worthy of Indiana
Jones and Jackie Chan that let one get to their limit while still
| Jeremiah Lewis 5/7/07 . chapter 2
Another interesting idea. Look forward to more of this one.
| obsidian-fox 5/7/07 . chapter 2
Definitely one of the most interesting stories I've seen in the Ranma fandom. I suppose they still have Legion pay-chests up their sleeves? Once again wealthy as sin...
I look forward to more.
| Fasor 5/5/07 . chapter 2
| Blackdex 5/3/07 . chapter 2
My only complaint is the even spread of skills, I would find it more believable that they would each specialize, doesn’t mean that they cant do it all, just that they are better in their chosen areas. I really dislike copying Ranma’s learning curve, at least in all fields. Other than that, it’s a great piece.
| Erentei Lord of Insanity 5/2/07 . chapter 2
Have a helluva lot of fun.
This is possibly the best scenario for godmodding characters I've ever seen.
| TerraBull 4/11/07 . chapter 2
I liked the story so far, Questions and Comments?
I am surprised that Shampoo did not write a letter to Cologne while they were in the Foreign Legion, could they have communicated and perhaps altered the past?
I know it mentioned that there was the storm within the village and the attacks, there being a Monsoon or some such.
"Every month at the quarter moon
There'll be a monsoon in your lagoon."
Is there a possibility that Jusenkyo would be flooded? What has been happening within the mountain range since Shampoo was included within the game?
If Ranma ever did go back to the 'Past' would there be crossovers with notable movies such as "King Solomon's Mines, Indiana Jones And Raiders of the Lost Arc, The Mummy, Tarzan, Charge of the Light Brigade?" Hmm, I was wondering if they would have had the chance to Fly some old Cloth Air Planes, perhaps meeting the Red Baron? ;p
What else would I do with the Game if I was a Uber Martial Artist? It would depend on the current play, for the one where they were in the Legion, I would attempt to get in contact with maybe one or two of the 'Ancient Master's' of a art or two that I might owe a favor or they did me a kindness, maybe a bit of advice or word of warning for some event?
Hmm, spend time with my friends, learn as much as I could? I was agree about the comments made by dogbertcarroll.
Who created Jumanji? Is it self upgrading? I was curious if Ranma and others continued to play, would it inspire another game to be made? "Nermia"
Hmm, would you care for a few possible turn's? Just trying to help, if not, no need.
"From Ancient Times, Comes a Terror
Staying Put would be a Error."
Perhaps a Dinosaur or something else that could have survived within Jumanji? *heh* for some reason,thinking 'Lost World' or 'Jurassic Park' or 'King Kong', Hmm.. depending on what happens with the game, would Ranma have a chance to meet Godzilla or any sort of the old Sentai/ Giant Robot types?
"Beneath your feet, the Lava flows
Better leave, before it blows."
Maybe a redo of the movie Volcano in a setting of Japan or Jusenkyo?
"Hard to believe, but it got worse
You have recieved, Jumanji's Curse"
Up to the author's discretion?
"Good or Bad, Blessing and Trouble
Jumanji's effects, have been Doubled"
"Blessings recieved, Harmful Curses Lifted
Long Life and Happiness, have been Gifted"
Hmm, something to balance out? Curses and Diseases or bad effects nullified?
"Defeating the Champion, A Task undone
Once Completed, A Paragon"
Sorry, just had the image of a fight between someone, a 'Final Boss' Challenge of sorts that may go on for a long time, a self upgrading rival? A type of 'Mortal Kombat' for Africa? Are there Martial Arts that Originated there?
Hmm, What else was within the Pay Chests? Maybe some undocumented Treasures or Magic's? *Heh* sorry, thinking about a 'Magic Lamp' type thing.
What has been going on within the area's that Ranma and Shampoo disappeared from, that you mentioned time was passing? I admit, I am curious, local invasions? Could Jumanji's effects mix with Jusenkyo's?
Cont when you can, I enjoyed the read.
| Gree 4/11/07 . chapter 2
Another great chapter
| cyrgon0 4/10/07 . chapter 2
Awesome... will there be any adventure to a future time, one more technologically advanced than ours?
Anyway: awesome chapter-I certainly hope that you get the chance to update soon!