i love it

Great job! It made me smile because it was so cute and well-written.

aw... i love this... =D *squealing*

its soo.. CUTE! yama-kun ALWAYS make things better ne?

=D

I smiled like an idiot when I read this. :) It was a bit choppy, but it was appropriate. Nice job.

oh that was so cute. nice story.

love always
nickygirl

Cute. I thoroughly enjoied this one. Keep writing.

Really cute. Just in time for the holidays. I loved it. I love hot chocolate that way Yamato made it, that's how my nana makes it and its the best...anyway really cute story. Merry Christmas.

I'm not a fan of Sorato.

But I really liked this. A lot.

Good job. =)

--DI

That was great! I'll be sure to check out some of your other works!