 spinningleaves 2008-09-29 . chapter 1Aww a sad look at the way things could've turned out! Excellent! |
 Rinne 2007-01-11 . chapter 1A very sad look at the reality of their lives. |
 C.N. Johns 2007-01-03 . chapter 1Great! I loved this! Whatever happened to the sequel of 'These Crimes of Illusion?' |
 carocali 2006-12-31 . chapter 1Interesting musings of their lives apart. Maybe if the card hadn't been tossed...
I love the idea of Dean trying to take a vacation, but realizing it would never happen.
Nice work!
:D
Caroline |
 Riana1 2006-12-22 . chapter 1You are the rarest of writers-- solid through and through. |
 1967Impala 2006-12-22 . chapter 1good job! i really liked it and how dean wanted to be normal. i loved the last line by John. keep up the good work! Dean deserved that vacation. God Bless merry Christmas!! |
 EagleGirl6 2006-12-22 . chapter 1It's nice to see something from you again:) This was a sad little story, but I love the idea that Jessica would have sent a christmas card to Sam's family like that. And so realistic that John would keep track of what Dean's doing.
Thank you very much for posting this,
Kelly |