very good

this story is terrible. and gay. I wish it never existed.

Ok then...

Amber

Very confusing story - it's like you can't decide who you want your characters to be so they keep bouncing around and changing. There's no consistency in any of them and a lot of OC's that pop out of nowhere without any sort of explination. And yes I understand that the chapters and scenes are not in chronological order so people will have changed and evolved over time due to actions that we have not seen yet. What is there is very well written. The individual scenes are descriptive and well written it is the story as a whole that is confusing.
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So, uh, did the story just come full circle? I'm slightly confused. Is Harry a Seer and that's why he made that comment " Pain…? Why do I remember pain, hideous pain, and three friends…a…funeral? And a Will… what did I dream?" in the third chapter? It's almost like this whole thing just came full circle.

Argh, like I said. I'm quite confused so please update so the confusion lessens. ^^;;
-D.S.

I find the chapter order a bit confusing, but this story is interesting enough that I'll continue to read

Good please update soon

lol luv this story

the third chapter amuses me.

A great begining to a story I love it:) Keep up the great work and update as soon as you possibly can:) May you be blessed with inspiration and have fun writing:)

Bye for now and have a nice summer:)

O_O
what.just.happened!?
everything made sense up untill the part where harry was in hell or something

This is a excellent story.

Interesting...tryt to clean up the story so its easier to read.

Nice work. very interesting start. keep at it.

i love it please update