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sneggz
2008-03-26 . chapter 3
sinister hospitable. at first it made me laugh, then i thought, duh hes from the victorian era and she is a willing test subject. i loved the part where he offered her tea, and the dr who ref. question though, since hes a geneticist, why didnt she ask him to get rid of the deathmark? side question, do you think elixir could, since his mutation is supposedly genetic based?
myob
2007-12-01 . chapter 11
Thank you for the enjoyable story. The time and effort put into this story is greatly appreciated. I want to apologize for not reviewing it sooner. Please keep up the excellent writing and may all your plot bunnies be good ones.
brainfear
2007-11-21 . chapter 11
Morbidly exciting till the very end! So evil of you. Loved it. ;o)
Mirrordjyn
2007-06-27 . chapter 11
My goodness, you've no idea how happy this made me to see you've continued this. Even just events from their daily lives is ridiculously interesting to read. It's a satisfying mix of humor, horror, and general happiness.

I hope this isn't the end for you and this pairing. You're really quite talented and I'd very much look forward to reading anything else you choose to write on them. Thank you again!
A Reader
2007-06-25 . chapter 11
Thank you for your story that was both well written and original. I can't remember reading this kind of hero x villain pairing for some time, and with Sinister who isn't any of those regularly visiting characters. The only thing that left me wondering was how Sinister so willingly and fast let Rachel change him during their time together, yet his behaviour or manners had no effect on her. Surely, when any two people spend much time together, they both have some effect on each other... Anyway, just wanted to write some nice comments about a story that has become one of my favorite x-men fics :)
Aira Slytherin
2007-06-12 . chapter 1
Absolutely awesome story - I've always love Sinister (he's so good-looking in a weird way), and the pairing's an excellent touch (says she who adores unusual couples).
But like The Bud, I'd love to see Rachel's mum come back - and perhaps herself hook up with someone similar (like Apocalypse - okay, don't thik I'm mad, I just like him too, and they'd make an awesome pair. Plus u can exploit how mother and daughter will interract because of their choice of men, and their guys have always been at each other's throats anyway - which could be quite the entertainment to watch again. It's only a suggestion though - but I'd truly love to see it...)
Mirrordjyn
2007-04-04 . chapter 10
Absolutely brilliant. Reading this has reminded me of my long-forgotten love of Mr. Sinister from that terribly bad (and therefore awesome) cartoon from when I was a kid. I think he had pointy teeth in that one, which is a little ridiculous if you ask me.

Anyway! This is really an amazing piece you put together here. I’m always intrigued by how authors put together unconventional pairings and work out their psyche’s to see how they can end up together. What you have done is realistic and painful as you use both their strengths, and mostly their weaknesses, to bring them together. Your writing style is superb and it brings the reader in. You also have a tendency to use humor to diffuse what would rather be terribly tense situations, and that is always enjoyable. There were quite a few times when I laughed out loud (and, sadly, I was reading this in public so now everyone thinks I’m crazy).

I’m really looking forward to those promised one-shots. I’d actually like to see them go head to head again, such as Rachel tries to leave him for whatever reason (maybe just a misunderstanding) and his obsessive, possessiveness kicks in. I think Sinister’s obsession is what really drives him as a character, and now that she is his obsession I’d like to see that explored. You have such a beautiful way with words that I really hope you do go back to this pairing and write some more. I would be ever so thankful. I’d sing and dance, but very quietly, because rubber rooms do not interest me much.

Thank you so much!
The Bud
2007-02-01 . chapter 10
Ahh. Perhaps ended all too soon, me thinks.
brainfear
2007-01-30 . chapter 10
Fantastic! I loved every chapter. I can't wait for your snippets. ;o) Heh.
Tenderfoot
2007-01-30 . chapter 10
Demented, but sweet. That sums it up perfectly. :)
A great ending to a great story.
Tenderfoot
2007-01-30 . chapter 9
You weren't kidding when you said your stories featuring 'mentally uneasy romance'. :) But this is so wonderfully written, the internal logic of this fic is flawless (as far as I can tell anyway) and Sinister became a 3-demsional character (not to mention somewhat attractive...in a very disturbing sorta way... lol...I'm kinda freakin myself out here).

In short this is a fantasic story! I absolutly adore it. ^_^
Sarahbeth
2007-01-26 . chapter 9
Oh.My.God. This may be my absolute favorite story on this entire website. Excellent writing skills, great character plots and just outstanding job! PLEASE update A.S.A.P. I want morning-after feelings and I don't know how much longer I can wait!
brainfear
2007-01-24 . chapter 9
Awesome! Loved it! Although, the love scene was excruciatingly short! Aw. :(
B Oots
2007-01-22 . chapter 9
Please update soon, so I can read, what happens between Rachel and Nathaniel next?
The Bud
2007-01-22 . chapter 8
What ever happened to Threnody?
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