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| Butterfree 2008-07-09 ch 1,  | abuseWow, it's just so cute looking at how peaceful the four are in your story compared to how much hatred that was spread in the game. I love the idea of Kharg and Paulette naming their children after Kharg's parents; I can definetly imagine him doing that. The story was kind of lacking in conflict and resolution though. ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
| cool-people-suck 2008-01-13 ch 2, | abuselol cute Arc TOS fics!! considering they are holiday fics you did a great job trying to keep them in character :D |
| Amanda Weidner 2007-07-25 ch 1, anon. | abusei like this one to, it was funny. it crossed my mined that maby you could do a holloween one and a thanksgiving one, but is jest a thought. |
| Alias-Hawk 2007-04-03 ch 2, | abuseanother wonderfull fic. There s nothing more to say. Alias-Hawk p.s.: in my last review I wrote your alias wrong and I want to correct myself. It's Elf Wench. sorry. ^^U |
| Alias-Hawk 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuseWow! this is so... I really don't have words for it!! The only weird thing is that I'm reading it in spring. XD This is awesome! I barely noticed the OOC!! (or is it that I haven't played the game in months? o.0 I'll never know.) Alias-Hawk p.s.: WOW! ELFWRENCH?! I knew I saw that writing style somewhere else! I'm glad I can review a fic of yours... but now is time for me to update myself with aftermath... I left in chapter 26... I guess. |
| Salacassera 2007-01-15 ch 2, | abuseI'm a bit late, but that was adorable! I love the twins, and the dialogue between everyone. |
| Shadow B. Panther 2006-12-27 ch 1, | abuseI'll admit that it's a good story and even though it's not attached to your other story, it gives some nice ideas about them in the end. On thing I have to wonder about are the other four characters, I can see Bebedora being curious about the even and Kharg was Meru's first friend. As for the two being OOC, I'd say that years of being with humans and getting use to emotions most likely calmed them bot a great deal. |
| Random Zaku Pilot 2006-12-22 ch 1, | abuseI liked it good story |