A great story. Very well written.

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Cute story

Oh my, this is hilarious. ^_^

Hahahah funny funny story! Poor dwarf, though. What'd he do?? Hah! I can picture some people I know to do a thing like that. Just wanted to say 'thanks for the entertainment'! I nearly fell out of my chair when she kicked him! Lovely.

~~meriagrin Baggwise~~

Well characterized. Poor dwarf, Bilbo will have to give him an extra special cake. One note... Tolkien made a point of using dwarves instead of dwarfs.