 Gracie 5/5/00 . chapter 1 A bit drawn out for sure, but incredibly well-written. It could have been more effective, I think, if some of the Continuum dialog had been cut ou seemed a little repetitive at times. However, the first five paragraphs make a great opener, and the ending is equally compelling. I don't know a whole lot about the Continuum, but from what I do know, you seem to really know how to write "Q-talk." Again, a *very* well-written and thoughtful piece. |