really glad to see you are still writing this one (and writing AMC fics). I don't watch the show anymore, and every time I look at a scene out of curiosity the dang show is worse than it was before.. it's nice to read a fic that has all the characters I loved in it... it's almost like watching the show again.

Love this line, even though it is so heartbreaking.

He had promised her the same thing, but… but it was different, and it was a different that broke her.

Thrilled to see you updated. There are not enough stories about K and R. To me they are a supercouple. Love that you are writing about them.

The part about Ryan and his dream was fantastic. Looking forward to seeing what happens next with this story.

Great song choice.

Awesome sentence

Babe destroyed everything she touched, even if she was too stupid to realize it.

Love that you gave Jack a POV. First time I have ever seen that in a fic.

You really tapped into the pain of Ryan and Kendall. I feel so bad for them both. But I hope that Ryan will soon be by her side in this story.

Kendall could handle hangovers; it was the dead babies and broken hearts that she was drowning in.

What an amazing sentence! It really hits you square in the chest.

I also liked the line about Lena.

and this line

And, God, it had been one beautiful mistake, for a heartbeat there.

I adored the quiet intensity of the David section.

I love your writing style. You have me caught up in this story already.

Interesting beginning!

I'm guessing...it's JR in the hospital instead of Binks this time?

Great hook. You got my attention!