Cool Tenten's got wind chakra. i enjoyed readin this and i liked the cute moment at the ending.

The story was really good. Yes the ending was slightly cheesy. but really sweet. It kinda makes me want a guy to say that to me. lol. :P

My vision is the same...I'm a four-eyes LOL!
Anyway...YES THEY KISSED! WUHU!

Your fanfics=Love. xD Seriously. And yay, Asuma gets luff! =D I love the bit with him and he's like How come Gai got all the smart kids?? xD Great writing on your part, I loved it.

like it

Just as good as 'Bandages'. Loved it and the ending made me smile and my heart flutter.lolz

aww! how cute! especially the last part!! good luckies with your future stories!!

Man, I didn't know it would be that fluffy!

I'M SHOCKED!

I'M STUNNED!!

I'M FLABBERGASTED!!

... Okay, I look like an idiot.

GREAT WORK! I like it.

lol
"Take what?"
"My heart. You stole it."

LOL ... that was so corny that it actually made me smile!

superb job!

really great story sorry about your eyesight

lol...i just loive the tenten kicking butt thingie. real.ly do. it's awesome. the ending was a bit cheesy for my tastes but endings are always the hardest to make..lol

Great story! This is written very nicely! Sorry about your site. God bless!

NO!

aww I'm sorry/ tht sux I go next week so wow. I might have to do the same thing

Great fanfiction. Looking at the computer shouldn't really affect your vision unless you have a CRT or something. If you have an LCD then it shouldn't make a difference. However, it is generally good to take a break every four hours so that your eyes can focus on different things. Maybe you'll make a sequel to the sequel?