Very good!

Please update your story soon it's great.

I love this please write more soon

I like this whole new twist of a story, very original and compeling. If I do say so, continue and get that next chapter out! I am eager to find out what will happen.. " you will never be able to fly till I give you wings.."

noooooooooooooo it can't end there pwease pwease pwease continue?

..

sheesh I thought Beryl was bad but now she just seems a little twisted... okay make that really twisted.

Anywho i'm going of to read the next chapter!

adois amigos

..

tsk tsk tsk when will Beryl ever learn, she's still a green eyed monster thingy...any who i think this story is...

Yaaa super awsome coolness!

yep, that sums it up.

..

Ya this is a great story! me likes alot, enough to read to next chapter and wait for more to come *grin*

..

This is like one of the best stories ever! You must write more ASAP!

Ja ne

Charity