I really liked your story! You captured the characters really well. :)

This is a great little story.

this is a great story

I'm speechleess. This story was absolutely breathtaking. Everything felt so real...You are a terrific writer.

good story

what a great story!

and unlike most of the people here I don't think you need another chapter I think it was great the way it was you made the story very real like you could feel Lucy's pain so bravo, bravo

too much Magic Bus

You did a good job writing this story. I could picture it happening. I could see this being something that would happen on 7th Heaven. Are you sure that you didn't take it from the show.

That was great.

Great story. Write more.

wow...it actually made me cry. Not many things can do that. Excellent fic!

my other name is simminkindofgirl. im writing a story with the ikdea of lucy being held hostage, but sh' married to Kevin and has children. could i use ur story idea? im not going to copy it. LOL

tear, tear, tera, tear, tear, tear, tear, tear, tear, im crying. this is so sad. u should put it into more than one chapter. tear, tear, tear, tear, tear, tear, tear. im 2 sad, 2 write my last three letters,(lol)

that was a really good story...I just joined but I wanted to read all of the old fan fics...I about died when I read it...to bad you haven't written more about it!

I think your story was great.I was setting there and i felt that i was in it thats how great it up the writing because you are good at it.I even write stores fore 7th heaven for fun.

This story is WONDERFUL! Just like all your others! I LOVE IT! SparksJSH, you really are a talented writer. You are my fanfiction idol! I can only hope that someday I become as good a writer as you!

Bravo! Please continue! Don't stop! Write more!