Good stuff here. I like your style of writing. I hope you continue this!

One little tiny factual error: John and Samuel Adams were cousins, not brothers. Other than that, it was very very good! I love the Revolutionary War time period so I was absolutely physiqued when I saw this! (have you read Time Enough For Drums by Ann Rinaldi? Its this same time period and one of my favorites.)

Cheers!

This is so wonderful! Write/update soon!

This is a wonderful story so far. I hope you will write more soon!