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Light's Blue Blossom
2008-07-25
ch 42,
abuseI love the chapter! It was well written. I'm really curious about the adults though. And it's peculiar how Kouichi doens't want Kouji dead... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
TwinkieTUTUS
2008-07-24
ch 42,
abuseoh my! that was a freakin long chapter! wonderful, though. what's the story?! update soon please!
Gold Dragon36
2008-07-24
ch 40,
abuseK, I've read your author note in this chap and I would love to help for the game if I can. In the ways I can help are voice acts: I've taken some acting lessons and it's my major rite now, and game script, I could probably do that, but if I'm working around other people; I brainstorm better in groups. I can even draw! You just tell what you need, I'm all hears!
Kazehime- Izumi Orimoto
2008-07-24
ch 42,
abuseso the mysteries r starting to unfold n my serious training begins now, ne?
GROVY...!
yes, it was really amaizing, especially how the story is keeping its pace n how it's getting better n better.
hope to read MORE n MORE n MORE (can't get enough!lol)
anyways, *clearing the throat* great update! don't give up the great work! ^_^
Enceladus Shadow
2008-07-13
ch 41,
abuseI'm new to the site and this is the first story I read and I just love it so far! It's really cool how you make them talk like they're really in midieval times (I hope I spelled that right lol). Anyways keep up th fantastic work! I can't wait to read what happens next!
Kazehime- Izumi Orimoto
2008-07-11
ch 41, anon.
abusewow! what a relief! it was as if i was holding my breathe until this chapter showed up. anyways,thanx for the great news in this chapter. this fic is turning out AMAIZINGLY well, i see. keep up the great work! ^_^
keep in-touch. look out for new mails n mail me too (to inform me of the next update on the fic n the game, n if u ever feel lonely or in a talking mood - both ^_^)
see ya son!
Sightbent
2008-07-10
ch 41,
abuseAnother good update. It's about time those two got together, can't wait for some more Takumi-ness.
Light's Blue Blossom
2008-07-10
ch 41,
abuseI would love to help but I'm computer retarded. I just know the basics of using a computer, nothing about game program making.

Anywho, this chapter was great! I liked seeing another side of the Commander with Takuya. It was nice. Can't wait for the next chapter!
dogluv101
2008-07-10
ch 41,
abuseWel... I guess it does answer my question. lol Great chapter!! I loved every bit of it.

I'm guessing that Izumi's father approves of Takuya's and Izumi's relationship then?

Please update soon!
Gehktus Yht Kq Yht Tekesuh
2008-07-07
ch 40,
abuseWhat game?
Kazehime- Izumi Orimoto
2008-07-07
ch 40, anon.
abuseWOW! that chapter was amazing! i was SO scared of what izumi's father would do to takuya n i can't help but wonder what happened next. i cant wait for the next update. please continue your great work. BTW keep a look out for new e-mails. u know u have my support. seeyasoon
TwinkieTUTUS
2008-07-06
ch 40,
abusewonderful chapter! biased shmiased. it was good. and yay that they found the little bit of izumi's power! woot! i can't wait to see what happens next, especially with izumi and her dad. udpate soon please!
Sightbent
2008-07-06
ch 40,
abuseAnother great chapter. I can't wait until some of these mysteries come to light.

Good luck with the game, I can't wait to play it (if you release it that is...)
dogluv101
2008-07-06
ch 40,
abuseWow, just wow. Did Izumi tell him that she loves him!!?? Please tell me! OMG this is getting good!! Please update soon.
Light's Blue Blossom
2008-07-06
ch 40,
abuseI thought it was a good chapter! Who the Leader is makes me very curious and how the Commander behaves toward Takuya should be interesting, but I wonder how the General will feel about Takuya. UPDATE SOON!

BTW, the game idea sounds interesting! I need to go vote. =)
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