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| Light's Blue Blossom 2008-07-25 ch 42, | abuseI love the chapter! It was well written. I'm really curious about the adults though. And it's peculiar how Kouichi doens't want Kouji dead... PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| TwinkieTUTUS 2008-07-24 ch 42, | abuseoh my! that was a freakin long chapter! wonderful, though. what's the story?! update soon please! |
| Gold Dragon36 2008-07-24 ch 40, | abuseK, I've read your author note in this chap and I would love to help for the game if I can. In the ways I can help are voice acts: I've taken some acting lessons and it's my major rite now, and game script, I could probably do that, but if I'm working around other people; I brainstorm better in groups. I can even draw! You just tell what you need, I'm all hears! |
| Kazehime- Izumi Orimoto 2008-07-24 ch 42, | abuseso the mysteries r starting to unfold n my serious training begins now, ne? GROVY...! yes, it was really amaizing, especially how the story is keeping its pace n how it's getting better n better. hope to read MORE n MORE n MORE (can't get enough!lol) anyways, *clearing the throat* great update! don't give up the great work! ^_^ |
| Enceladus Shadow 2008-07-13 ch 41, | abuseI'm new to the site and this is the first story I read and I just love it so far! It's really cool how you make them talk like they're really in midieval times (I hope I spelled that right lol). Anyways keep up th fantastic work! I can't wait to read what happens next! |
| Kazehime- Izumi Orimoto 2008-07-11 ch 41, anon. | abusewow! what a relief! it was as if i was holding my breathe until this chapter showed up. anyways,thanx for the great news in this chapter. this fic is turning out AMAIZINGLY well, i see. keep up the great work! ^_^ keep in-touch. look out for new mails n mail me too (to inform me of the next update on the fic n the game, n if u ever feel lonely or in a talking mood - both ^_^) see ya son! |
| Sightbent 2008-07-10 ch 41, | abuseAnother good update. It's about time those two got together, can't wait for some more Takumi-ness. |
| Light's Blue Blossom 2008-07-10 ch 41, | abuseI would love to help but I'm computer retarded. I just know the basics of using a computer, nothing about game program making. Anywho, this chapter was great! I liked seeing another side of the Commander with Takuya. It was nice. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| dogluv101 2008-07-10 ch 41, | abuseWel... I guess it does answer my question. lol Great chapter!! I loved every bit of it. I'm guessing that Izumi's father approves of Takuya's and Izumi's relationship then? Please update soon! |
| Gehktus Yht Kq Yht Tekesuh 2008-07-07 ch 40, | abuseWhat game? |
| Kazehime- Izumi Orimoto 2008-07-07 ch 40, anon. | abuseWOW! that chapter was amazing! i was SO scared of what izumi's father would do to takuya n i can't help but wonder what happened next. i cant wait for the next update. please continue your great work. BTW keep a look out for new e-mails. u know u have my support. seeyasoon |
| TwinkieTUTUS 2008-07-06 ch 40, | abusewonderful chapter! biased shmiased. it was good. and yay that they found the little bit of izumi's power! woot! i can't wait to see what happens next, especially with izumi and her dad. udpate soon please! |
| Sightbent 2008-07-06 ch 40, | abuseAnother great chapter. I can't wait until some of these mysteries come to light. Good luck with the game, I can't wait to play it (if you release it that is...) |
| dogluv101 2008-07-06 ch 40, | abuseWow, just wow. Did Izumi tell him that she loves him!!?? Please tell me! OMG this is getting good!! Please update soon. |
| Light's Blue Blossom 2008-07-06 ch 40, | abuseI thought it was a good chapter! Who the Leader is makes me very curious and how the Commander behaves toward Takuya should be interesting, but I wonder how the General will feel about Takuya. UPDATE SOON! BTW, the game idea sounds interesting! I need to go vote. =) |