 'Blue Moon and Roses' 2007-08-08 . chapter 1HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I guess Mikan didn't think of checking the dictionary but even if she did she wouldn't understand what the word that explained it means! |
 GaNGsta GaL 2007-07-17 . chapter 1funny, really...haha! mikan is so dense! really! |
 bLuebLuebLue 2007-05-11 . chapter 1..haha..that was s0 hiLari0us! XD
..it's awes0me!..^_^.. |
 eiika 2007-01-02 . chapter 1hahahahahahaha...ouch(stomach hurting coz of laughter)
that's a gud one...but seperate the sentences!ok? |
 kawaii kurai tenshi 2006-12-30 . chapter 1helo!
nice story
but you should have seperated the sentences
so it can be read easily ne?
great job anyways!
^_^ lol |
 This Seraphim 2006-12-25 . chapter 1Monday inside the classroom:
“What’s wrong with him?” Natsume asked pointing at Mr. Narumi
The blonde looks like he hadn’t slept for hours. “I don’t know he’s been like that all morning.” Ruka replied petting his usagi, “he keeps mumbling about the internet poisoning children’s minds.”
--> i love this part!! XD
“Come on!
” “NO!”
“Just tell me!”
“No!”
“Is it a game?”
“No! Idiot.”
“Is it fun?”
“No. well…”
“Can you just show me what it is?”
“NO!”
Mikan sighed in frustration. “You’re not helping Natsume!”
--> and this too! XD
four thumbs up - keep up the good work!
Merry Christmas! |
 kawaii.yan 2006-12-23 . chapter 1 hahahha that's unexpected... oh well at least she first saw that word on the internet while i saw that in a religion magazine...
i really like the ff part:
“Is it fun?”
“No. well…”[natsume you pervert :3]
“Can you just show me what it is?”
“NO!”
hehe |
 chammel 2006-12-23 . chapter 1*laugh* u-update as soon as u can okay...I love it...
masturbation?!?!?! hahahahaha
“Just tell me!”
“No!”
“Is it a game?”
“No! Idiot.”
“Is it fun?”
“No. well…”
“Can you just show me what it is?”
“NO!”
I love that part! Mikan is very dense indeed...Anyway update fast okay... |
 Madame-Glasses 2006-12-23 . chapter 1AHAHAHAHA!!
That's so cool!
Poor Narumi..
"Is it a game?" "No! Idiot." "Is it fun?" "No. Well..." "Can you just show me what it is?" "NO!" |
 Shiori90210 2006-12-23 . chapter 1hahaha I can't..stop...laughing
(rolls on floor laughing hard) |
 WhiteWisteria 2006-12-23 . chapter 1lol...Mikan still as dense as ever :D
and poor naru-chan ^^; who knows what ordeal he must have gone through ^^
short and sweet ^^ i like it (:
snowmirage |
 Hunni Chan 2006-12-23 . chapter 1LOL phbht...*trying not to laugh* When Mikan asked that I choked too.. xDD Poor Narumi!! xD LOL It was a bit hard to read though so try seperating the sentences, ne? ^^ It was pretty funny for a first! good job! xDD |
 michiy0 2006-12-23 . chapter 1hahaha it's cute |
 Tsubame Sakura 2006-12-23 . chapter 1 Can you seperate the sentences so that it would be easy to read. |