Simple I JUST LOVED IT

I NEED MORE

are you gonna continue? cuz i really wanna find out what would happen next...anywayz, i really really really enjoyed you ami/zoi (sorta) fic! please continue (if you want to that is, i'm not really begging...yet...) ja ne!

i really did like how you described her drastic change. I must admit though, i would like to have read a bit more on a description of the doll. oh wellz :D

_ It was lovely when I read it at Generals Love and it's lovely now. I really like the way you worked it and, even though you stopped before the romance could take hold, I think that continuing might have lessened the importance of the realization.

Beautifully done.

[I can't help but put in a plug for my own Ami/Zoicite story, Untouchable. I *need* more reviews! I made the mistake of posting all I had at once and... well, that always gets a story lost too quickly in the jumble of SM updates.]

"...uuuummmmmmmm...cool! I like ami-chan stroies! She's an underused, underloved character! She my fav! ...later?...

...pumpkin pie is good...

...McDonalds...coke...big mac...all is bad...me idiot...bun-byes..." Said Darkevilchic as she cocked an eyebrow at the story and proceeded to search for her missing stash containing 7 pounds of sugar and a swiss mocha machine.

Kaze! I will finish the editing... Really, I will!*mumbles* But e-mail me and tell me what you want to do for the ending and any other alterations. But this fic was adorable and the picture to go with it is even *cuter*.- Keep it up Kaze! Maybe I'll see ya on AIM sometime this week.

Very nice. I liked it. It is good to see Ami-chan focus on something other than studying for once. And the ending was very cute (I just knew she was making a Zoisite doll). You did a pretty good job. Maybe I should start eating junk food while I write my stories...

I like this story. I am a big fan of Generals/Senshi stories. And a bigger fan of Ami/Zoisite, so please continue writing about them.