Could you please continue soon? plz? Because this is great so far.

And I WANT TO SEE MORE!

I don't know why I love this so much. Maybe because its happened to me before. :(

;-;

I love it!

...it's a shame that this story is true in real life, too. It's hard to remain friends when you never do things together.

Poor Gary, he does alway seem lonely...

Wow. I love your characterization of Ash as he realizes these things...the consequences of having a one-track mind, why he should listen even if it's his rival telling him these things...poor guy.

Wow...Gary's words were deep. This was very depressing please don't end it here. Please make a new chapter. This was sad!

That was so sad, so very sad.

This is great! _ Please don't end it there!

YEAH! I luv it! _ need more chappies tho! Don't leave me hanging! _ (annoying, aren't I) _;;;

Great story! Please continue!

A. Satoshi

Some how I read the last paregraph frist and thought that Ash had died

and became a Ghoast. I'm not a gymshipper but so far three of your fics

you wrote are going to go on my favorites and this is one of them.

do please continue...I stink at reviews

You know that is so true! I can see now your point! about the whole situation and the Misty and Brock thing! I liked this one a lot! Angie*

Oh, so sad! It's true, isn't it? Being at the top must really be lonely... Great fic. E-mail me? -

Very insightful! Into all the characters. Into what Gary and Ash have sacrificed in their striving to be masters, and into how Brock and Misty would turn to each other. And the ending was very powerful. Bravo!