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Olaf74
2008-08-06 . chapter 1
I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
macaday me a nut
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
Aww...he hehe...I could see them being just that. Their anger at each other would always get in the way of anything else I think. But hey...that is what fanfiction is for!
Macaday me a nut (and your one too!)
Macbeth2
2007-05-22 . chapter 1
Wow...that was...intense. I liked it! You are very good at writing fights, and I'm not. You are really good.
That Crazy Chick
2007-04-14 . chapter 1
Very nice. I like the way it was kinda an epilouge to the HP series. I shall end my review as follow:
Your story(even thought it is a oneshot)has immense potential of being a chap-to-chap story. I say this because their relationship has already been established, and the story plot would be easy to continue from there. Think about it.

Ja Ne,

Wolf Demon Kagome
page-write
2007-01-04 . chapter 1
Good job! so good in fact that I had to leave a note saying how much I liked it [second shot isn't a bad idea ^_^] even when I should be getting back to work...

30 second review is better than no review

Kudos!
fresh42jazz
2007-01-01 . chapter 1
Question... if they had graduated, why were they at Hogwarts? Because McGonagal said MR Potter and MR Malfoy, rather than "professor." ... ??
Yashida
2006-12-25 . chapter 1
Nice one!

However, there's more to this than just this one page, isn't there? Or is that just wishful thinking on my part?

Anyhow, it's an enticing beginning.

Please write more.
Tamyka
2006-12-23 . chapter 1
Great oneshot! I could see it going farther but more of a plot would be needed. It has potential though!
QuincePaste
2006-12-23 . chapter 1
Very very nice - i love love/hate relationships.
Kisses and merry christmas
~Quince
cle be
2006-12-23 . chapter 1
thought that was a reli good start:PYeh if u get the itch to do more on this story PLEASE DO! i luv it!
Well Done
cle be
xo
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