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SnapeLikesMyPatronus
2009-08-05 . chapter 1
Hahaha this is hilarious

I totally thought they were doing something bad at first. xD
THIS IS GREAT.
XD I'm adding this story to my faves.
DerangedxandxSarcastic
2008-03-19 . chapter 1
hahah clever of you, I assumed thats what it was, sweet though
Jack of the North
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
Obvious but still cute. I thought i had read this before but now that i think of it i think it was about polishing brooms. Stroking and rubbing... you get the picture...
MadBrilliant1880
2007-12-06 . chapter 1
that was so suggestive!
Jennicula
2007-04-17 . chapter 1
Believe it or not, I got that from the beginning. Hint: they wouldn't have THAT in a T rated fic
Alorkin
2007-02-13 . chapter 1
This was cute. Actually after a second or two, I realized that they were talking about flying. Bed chat between them would likely be a bit more 'interrupted' by the feelings. A well played bit of word-craft. Alorkin
Dr. B. Shadow
2007-02-13 . chapter 1
I had a feeling it had to do with broom stick riding since it shows in the books she hates flying lol.
Mizukey
2007-01-24 . chapter 1
You had me fooled until the last line of the story! It was great.
Wrights-and-Wrongs
2007-01-17 . chapter 1
funni very funni
FloatingGoddess
2006-12-27 . chapter 1
lol thanks alot! ha this is a really good conclusion to an evening of depressing stories!
ThatNameHasAlreadyBeenTaken
2006-12-25 . chapter 1
guessed the 5th line what was happening
MysticKitty21
2006-12-24 . chapter 1
This was good. 8D At first, I thought 'Oh, its probably something about riding a broom' then towards the end, it was like 'What? Maybe it really is about THAT...but prolly not.' But the end was cute. It gave me a laugh. Merry Christmas!
trinigal
2006-12-24 . chapter 1
That was good. I have seen stories similar before but it was like her telling someone else about something and it seemed like it was "it" you know, but I haven't seen anything like grasp it firmly. It was funny and I needed a laugh. Happy Christmas!
Suuz
2006-12-24 . chapter 1
Well as soon as i start reading i knew it was about the broom ride but you did quite a good job for the people with dirty minds:P
IrethMalfoy
2006-12-23 . chapter 1
umm it was a cute little drabble, yes. my only complaint is that it should be rated T for the inuendos ;) really it was good for a drabble.
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