This is unbelievably fantastic. Great writing. :D

Great idea! I love the smart, sassy Mary portrayed here - she's just perfect for John. Makes me wonder whether Dean knows how much like his Mom he is?!

All I can say is that I declare that this should be canon. I meant it, really. I loved this, mainly because this would easily explain the fierce love that John had for Mary. And I can totally see them doing this XD
Overall, fantstic job.

That was wonderful! Absolutely fantastic.

I LOVE IT...ITS SO GREAT! An AWARD should be giving to u for making me LMAO Seriously some authors are great w/ the drama and stuff, but the comedy and romance u described was GREAT I totally pictured the story in my mind LOL
PLZ write more stories like this it was god

Awesome story. Loved it.
Please write another!