Amazing detail and fantastic characters! There is a few subtle mistakes (an M14 is semi-automatic so there is no need to cock the bolt when you fire and a SEAL sniper is most likely to be using a more modern weapon like an SR-25.) but never the less it was a great story to read!

Good so far, PMC's aren't really allowed to go on the attack thier meant for defense. But w/e I'm not really an expert on it, keep it up!

This is a very interesting fic but I think that tens of millions of casualties is a bit much. I would think that the civil war would cost ten million casualties at most.

This is one of the greatest Special forces fan fics I have read. You must have done a lot of research for this fic.