Very eloquent and simply written yet says a lot. Definitely a wonderful edition to the sample IV collection on

Daaw, sweet! I liked muchly. Thank you for writing and sharing _

I know what you mean when you say the series was too short. When I was watching the eleventh episode, I was in denial that the last one was the twelth. It just couldn't be, there was so much more story they could have done.

I like this epilogue you created. It feels right. I has a sweet, nostalgic feeling to it, and it made me feel like seeing the series once more. Good work!

This bit is from a book but I thought it appropiate.

We live our lives a circle

And wander where we can

Then after fire and wonder

We end where we began

Great job. I love the ending! :)

You write one of the best NejiHina fics and I've liked your NejiHina fics since I read Four, Fourteen, Twenty-Four.

That aside, I really like this. There aren't that many Innocent Venus fics (which annoys me) and being able to find one apart from my own is a pleasant surprise and a great delight. I love how you finally have them come around in a circle because that is how it should have ended with them.