Dear Author,
I must tell you that this story is really good. Please,I know you may not have the time to write but I really would appreciate it if you could spare the free time to continue it. I am realy anticipating the next chapter please. It's really nice and i enjoyed reading it.
Yours Sincerely
Alien Girl

You have got to write more! I'm loving this story! There's not enough NakagoxYui out there! Please write more

Like it?
LOVE IT!

suchs emotions and a compelling story line!

hey, nice intro...hope to read the next chapters soon! :)

:D It's adorable! The opening was very dramatic - and you described the details nicely. :3 I wonder where you'll go with this?

oh my you shoulc update soon, it's so great :d Put it into my alert xD

Oh my yay I love this couple :d the the first chapter is amazing xD

I just started watching FY, but for some reason I was immediately attracted to this couple. ^^;

I love the way this story is going, and can already tell it's gonna be great the way Yui and Nakago interact. That combined with the fact that photography is one of my favorite hobbies, only adds to it.

Hope to see an update soon, this is amazing so far. =]

Great going!

Lovely fic, just the problem where is Nakago?

if you want you can just skip it to the part where he comes in

PZL PLZ PLZ update faster this time. Commendable chapter!

liked it? *scowls at the whole chap* OMFG, i LOVED it! *gives krystal a bone-crushing hug before dancing around like the mad fangirl that she is*

really, i was a bit hohum in the first chap coz yui gave herself up to tamahome--it'd probably have ben easier for me to swallow if he just raped her--but don't mind me, that's my fanaticism talking XDD)

things i love about this chap:

1) nuriko's with hotohori!! Squea*Squea*Squea*Squea
2) you perfectly got hotohori's narcissism!! gah, i loved those lines!! more squea!
3) nakie-poo is here!! nakie-poo is here! eardrum-breaking SQUEA! gah! he's so in character! and the banter, yes! they've started on the banter!

update soon!! i REALLY CAN'T WAIT!

Still awesome I love it it's really good ^.^

Wow, I know you said that this story was stuck at the momen... but it's really awesome and I have to story alert it just in case

The story's nice... lets see how this develops.

As for the writing style... it's not to my taste. I love reading things with more descriptions, so I was kinda dragging through this ficlet.

But do whatever works for you, coz in the end, the entire story as a whole should be good. :)

^_^

nice story krystal...update soon