 Uriel-Ecanus 2009-03-02 . chapter 1This is actually a really cool idea, mind if I use it? ( Could just go ahead, but, my pride as a man *cough*whowritesbolovestories*cough* would be diminished.) |
 Veglma 2008-03-03 . chapter 1Let me see... you just manage to make your 'world'/whatever more interesting now. :D
And maybe learn not to use anymore magic items. >.>
*laughs at Ryoga* |
 BlackRoseFire 2008-02-12 . chapter 1That was funny. |
 Hank da Crank 2007-09-12 . chapter 1S'not a spamfic. Barely an omake to a real story. Save this to put into a real story as comic relief.
Barely got a rise on the jokeometer. |
 Tae Hibiki 2007-09-09 . chapter 1XD Poor Ryouga. Didn't read the directions before!
I luffed it! |
 fortunata 2007-05-05 . chapter 1haha! that made me smile. kind of like those warning previews before the actual feature presentation. |
 Tama Saga 2006-12-25 . chapter 1...oops. |
 Howard Russell 2006-12-25 . chapter 1LOL! Great spamfic. Too bad not everybody got that it is one. |
 rmt 2006-12-25 . chapter 1Cute idea, but too short. This is more like the teaser summary you get on the back (or inside cover) of a novel to encourage you to read it, rather than a story in itself.
This has the potential to be expanded into a very interesting story. I really hope that you do. |
 Lykii 2006-12-24 . chapter 1You're so mean! Having such a tantalizing yet short prologue should be against the law! Anyway, this has definitely got me interested; can't wait for the next chapter! |
 MoonstoneCabbit 2006-12-24 . chapter 1This should serve as a warning to all of us. READ ALL THE INSTRUCTIONS FIRST!
Short and to the point works for this story. |
 dragontail2006 2006-12-24 . chapter 1hm... its kinda short but I'll wait for your next chapter. |
 Evil Kasumi 2006-12-24 . chapter 1This is but a teaser, right? RIGHT? XD
I'm hoping you continue this! I don't mind short chapters as long as one updates frequently.
Hope to see more of this! |
 DarkRubberNeck 2006-12-24 . chapter 1This would be the perfect start for a great story and yet it is a oneshot. I would have loved to read more ^_^ |
 Materia-Blade 2006-12-24 . chapter 1*Raised eyebrow.*
Length is a VERY good thing. I can handle short chapters. Short is a required thousand word minimum.
This is pitiful.
Decent idea and the writing is fine.
Length is completely pitiful.
Considering your name I suppose I can forgive you but still.
If you continue I will read on of course... just don't make a three hundred word continuation. People look at that and think... this isn't worth it. No way in heck. "Next." |