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Uriel-Ecanus
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
This is actually a really cool idea, mind if I use it? ( Could just go ahead, but, my pride as a man *cough*whowritesbolovestories*cough* would be diminished.)
Veglma
2008-03-03 . chapter 1
Let me see... you just manage to make your 'world'/whatever more interesting now. :D

And maybe learn not to use anymore magic items. >.>

*laughs at Ryoga*
BlackRoseFire
2008-02-12 . chapter 1
That was funny.
Hank da Crank
2007-09-12 . chapter 1
S'not a spamfic. Barely an omake to a real story. Save this to put into a real story as comic relief.
Barely got a rise on the jokeometer.
Tae Hibiki
2007-09-09 . chapter 1
XD Poor Ryouga. Didn't read the directions before!

I luffed it!
fortunata
2007-05-05 . chapter 1
haha! that made me smile. kind of like those warning previews before the actual feature presentation.
Tama Saga
2006-12-25 . chapter 1
...oops.
Howard Russell
2006-12-25 . chapter 1
LOL! Great spamfic. Too bad not everybody got that it is one.
rmt
2006-12-25 . chapter 1
Cute idea, but too short. This is more like the teaser summary you get on the back (or inside cover) of a novel to encourage you to read it, rather than a story in itself.

This has the potential to be expanded into a very interesting story. I really hope that you do.
Lykii
2006-12-24 . chapter 1
You're so mean! Having such a tantalizing yet short prologue should be against the law! Anyway, this has definitely got me interested; can't wait for the next chapter!
MoonstoneCabbit
2006-12-24 . chapter 1
This should serve as a warning to all of us. READ ALL THE INSTRUCTIONS FIRST!

Short and to the point works for this story.
dragontail2006
2006-12-24 . chapter 1
hm... its kinda short but I'll wait for your next chapter.
Evil Kasumi
2006-12-24 . chapter 1
This is but a teaser, right? RIGHT? XD
I'm hoping you continue this! I don't mind short chapters as long as one updates frequently.
Hope to see more of this!
DarkRubberNeck
2006-12-24 . chapter 1
This would be the perfect start for a great story and yet it is a oneshot. I would have loved to read more ^_^
Materia-Blade
2006-12-24 . chapter 1
*Raised eyebrow.*

Length is a VERY good thing. I can handle short chapters. Short is a required thousand word minimum.

This is pitiful.

Decent idea and the writing is fine.

Length is completely pitiful.

Considering your name I suppose I can forgive you but still.

If you continue I will read on of course... just don't make a three hundred word continuation. People look at that and think... this isn't worth it. No way in heck. "Next."
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