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| Drake 2008-06-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseUgh this whole thing was disgusting, I can't believe you made Naruto want Sakura the second hand all used up trash! You made Naruto still want her even after Sasuke and her talked about trying for a baby? So rank, poor Naruto some people really treat him like **. |
| CrazyKidDeath 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abusethat was ace! another great story |
| Serenarey Chiba 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseLovely! I had to read this entirely before going to watch Kung-Fu Panda! Thanks for the lovely read! |
| sillymail 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseThis was an amazing story. You have done an excellent job. ^w^ |
| keike 2008-06-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseum...LOVES IT. |
| Miss Finnish 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseI love it! although I have to say that the ending was a bit incoherent... still it was :3 |
| dogbertcarroll 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuse-Great, and now he was learning about the health of bastard Sasuke's sperm. -Gee, what other wonderful insights awaited? Naruto wondered if he'd still -be added to the cliffside monument if he Rasengan-ed his own head off. I was fully prepared to hate this fic from the summary, but after reading the Naruto/Scrooge story I decided to give it a shot and by the time I reached this bit I knew I'd struck gold! Brilliant! -"Oh god, my life is a bad ** novel written by the Perverted Hermit," the -Hokage bemoaned as he shuffled over towards his office chair. Are you claiming to be the toad sanin now? *snicker* -"Inari's running this awesome inn over in Wave Country," Naruto said, grabbing -both of her wrists this time. "The eel cuts they have are enough to give ramen -a run for its money. But, uh, don't tell ramen I said that." His first wife is Ramen! -"I see," Jiraiya said, rubbing his chin in contemplation. "Instead of training -you to survive a cult of demon collectors, I should have focused more on that -whole 'Birds and Bees' thing. And how it doesn't involve TOADS." LOL! Well to be fair if she was bright orange she probably could have convinced him. Great story, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. |
| anon. 2008-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abusenice story. but what exactly happened to the others like kiba, hinata and shino? |
| Scarlet Amaranth 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseLongest one shot ever, but I LOVED it! I can totally see that happening in the future~ It was really touching and sweet and funny ^^ |
| Juopunumies 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseDamn, just damn. It's too bad that you aren't writing any continuing ficlet with skills like these. |
| M1nks 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseYou did do a good job of balancing poignancy and humour. It was very moving in parts. There is far too little Naruto/Sakura pairing in the fan fiction world and this is a good one. |
| Hypno 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuse! Woot that was awesome man, but your NARU INO one was just awesome too you gotta do another one! |
| MiKe2vIcIoUs 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was impossibly awesome. For being so long, I have no idea how I couldn't get bored. You have a true skill my friend. |
| Rubel 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseAwesome! I laughed I loled I Rofled. Keep up the good work. |
| Roxbury Love 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseBest story I have ever read *favs |