Wow! That was just a LITTLE oneshot, huh? and the best NaruSaku ever!! I luvd it.

Great story.

Ah! Such a good story! You know, this story is exactly the reason why I read fanfiction. It's great to find amazing stories like this among the archives.

It's just nice to find serious gem of a fic like this one after sifting through hundreds and hundreds of **, trashy stories. Thanks for publishing this; you made my day :)

Very well written, and in character :D I enjoyed that a lot. Many thanks! x

Ya know, I found this by seeing at a drawing of yours on Deviant Art, and I have to admit this is damn good. Interesting story and a decent oneshot. Congrats!

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I love this. :D the plot, the summary, the 'seducing', how it ended. I'm glad Sasuke got beaten up, and I liked how you showed that Sakura was hurt by his decision, but also understood that he needed this. and I LOVED all the naru/saku bits, and Ino as well. great novella.

Great story. Loved how Sauske got his butt kicked.

hei! i agree with moonlightcreature's suggestion. this has got to be one of your best fics and i've probably read it for the hundredth time. it'd be really great if you made a sequel on how naruto proposes and his relationship with sakura after. and with your ability to put wit and humor into your fics, it would probably be just as great as this is. so please consider it? naruaku all the way! =)

hey really great story!!
love it

Wow! I didn't know what to expect with the title. It was also quite a novella indeed. What a wonderful balance of comedy and story advance, keeping true to Naruto characterizations. I'm so happy I came across this unusual piece. You have a unique and wonderful writing style that I must say left a smile on my face more than a few times. Thanks for sharing this wonderful tale.

that was by far the most random and thing I have ever read

Hey, this was a really good story. You did an excellant job on balancing humor, and drama, and I love how you wrote the conversations so fluently. Everyone seemed natural, and at ease, but still portrayed their characters without overreacting. Good job. (:

OHMIGOSH it's so LONG!
Loved it anyway- although I'm a sasusaku, NaruSaku is still very sweet!

This was fantastically great. :) I thought you did excellently on the characterizations and I loved that, while it was certainly a "drama", you held on to a light hearted delivery. I think that's what made this story wonderful. Good job.

This is brilliant. I love it and I think everyone is very well characterized. Particularly Naruto and Sakura. I love the idea of them and I like how Sasuke took and sideline in this. Again, Brilliant!