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Drake
2008-06-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseUgh this whole thing was disgusting, I can't believe you made Naruto want Sakura the second hand all used up trash! You made Naruto still want her even after Sasuke and her talked about trying for a baby? So rank, poor Naruto some people really treat him like **.
CrazyKidDeath
2008-06-16
ch 1,
abusethat was ace! another great story
Serenarey Chiba
2008-06-08
ch 1,
abuseLovely! I had to read this entirely before going to watch Kung-Fu Panda! Thanks for the lovely read!
sillymail
2008-06-08
ch 1,
abuseThis was an amazing story. You have done an excellent job. ^w^
keike
2008-06-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseum...LOVES IT.
Miss Finnish
2008-05-30
ch 1,
abuseI love it! although I have to say that the ending was a bit incoherent... still it was :3
dogbertcarroll
2008-05-28
ch 1,
abuse-Great, and now he was learning about the health of bastard Sasuke's sperm.
-Gee, what other wonderful insights awaited? Naruto wondered if he'd still
-be added to the cliffside monument if he Rasengan-ed his own head off.

I was fully prepared to hate this fic from the summary, but after reading the
Naruto/Scrooge story I decided to give it a shot and by the time I reached this
bit I knew I'd struck gold! Brilliant!



-"Oh god, my life is a bad ** novel written by the Perverted Hermit," the
-Hokage bemoaned as he shuffled over towards his office chair.

Are you claiming to be the toad sanin now? *snicker*



-"Inari's running this awesome inn over in Wave Country," Naruto said, grabbing
-both of her wrists this time. "The eel cuts they have are enough to give ramen
-a run for its money. But, uh, don't tell ramen I said that."

His first wife is Ramen!



-"I see," Jiraiya said, rubbing his chin in contemplation. "Instead of training
-you to survive a cult of demon collectors, I should have focused more on that
-whole 'Birds and Bees' thing. And how it doesn't involve TOADS."

LOL! Well to be fair if she was bright orange she probably could have convinced him.



Great story, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
anon.
2008-05-27
ch 1, anon.
abusenice story. but what exactly happened to the others like kiba, hinata and shino?
Scarlet Amaranth
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseLongest one shot ever, but I LOVED it! I can totally see that happening in the future~

It was really touching and sweet and funny ^^
Juopunumies
2008-05-22
ch 1,
abuseDamn, just damn. It's too bad that you aren't writing any continuing ficlet with skills like these.
M1nks
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abuseYou did do a good job of balancing poignancy and humour. It was very moving in parts. There is far too little Naruto/Sakura pairing in the fan fiction world and this is a good one.
Hypno
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuse! Woot that was awesome man, but your NARU INO one was just awesome too you gotta do another one!
MiKe2vIcIoUs
2008-04-11
ch 1,
abuseThat was impossibly awesome. For being so long, I have no idea how I couldn't get bored. You have a true skill my friend.
Rubel
2008-04-03
ch 1,
abuseAwesome! I laughed I loled I Rofled. Keep up the good work.
Roxbury Love
2008-03-20
ch 1,
abuseBest story I have ever read

*favs
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