Pretty fic, and nice characterization. However, why the alphabet theme, if you were going to stop at E (or technically M)? Or am I missing something?

Not that I think you should go on or elaborate, as it feels finished as-is.

dude...this was so awesome! i hope you update!

Aw... I'm truthfully addicted to your stories. You should have finished the alphabet. XP

Matt putting Mello on the couch is just so cute! And then... Mello isn't really asleep. Aw...!!

x - Addiction - x

Oh, wow! Brilliant! Your stories are gold! "they were ronin, masterless samurai, fighting for no one, but themselves." I love it... you should honestly be published... this is beautiful. You write from the heart... there is a human quality to your stories that very few writers have and that makes your characters compelling and real... The twist at the end was great. I am in awe... keep writing. It's obviously what you were meant to do.

I agree, why doesn't this have reviews? It's so cute!! -_- either way, awesome job, I love how you manage to keep them in character so perfectly

The lack of review is doing this piece no justice. There's something about each of your Mello-Matt fics that I find very satisfying. I've been converted to an elphabah-fan (I promise I won't stalk you, much) ;D