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Zeromaru Chaos Mode 2008-07-21 ch 10,	abuseI hate anise. but i have to admit, seeing her out logic jade was fun, even if jade deludes himself into believeing he gave her that one...
2008-06-23 ch 18, anon.	abuseWow. Just... wow. o.o ... While I'm waiting for my mind to catch up to the rest of my body, I will say this: That. Was. -Awesome-. I'll admit, I was a bit skeptical when I first started reading this. It's difficult to write a sequel to something and still keep it true to the spirit of the original material. But you? Spot on. The plot was engaging... enough to keep me rooted in my seat for 5 hours while I read this. The characters were portrayed excellently - not only did they feel like the party we know and love, I felt very sympathetic for them. Heck, during the Fracture Field chapter, I wanted to stab kid!Jade in the face myself. My only regret while reading this is that the story would eventually have come to an end. XD; Heck, the only question I can come up with right now is 'would you like your Internet cookies with chocolate chips?' X3;
Aloria 2008-05-29 ch 18,	abuseI totally understand about the characters getting away and doing their own thing bit. Happens to me all the time. I really enjoyed this story. It was amazing how WELL you knew the characters. Everything they said seemed to be exactly what they WOULD or SHOULD have said in any given situation - that kind of knowlege of the inside of their heads takes a lot of thought and practice writing them. At least as far as my experience with writing fanfiction goes. So, kudos to you for putting so much time and effort into this story. It was an amazing ride.
Aloria 2008-05-29 ch 17,	abusehar - I knew Luke just needed a kick in the pants to make him cough the orb up.
Aloria 2008-05-29 ch 16,	abuselol, Anise is learning the arte "Sarcasm." I think Jade is TRAINING Guy... Oh Jade, you use words like they were any other weapon. Careful where you turn that blade. You might hurt someone you care about. Heh - of COURSE Jade knows how to ice skate.
Aloria 2008-05-29 ch 15,	abuseLol - someone needs to give Luke a kick in the pants and make him cough up the orb.
Aloria 2008-05-29 ch 14,	abuseOh crap!! The ending of this chapter was INTENSE!
Aloria 2008-05-29 ch 13,	abuse"Oh, it will usually still teleport you, Luke," Jade grinned, poking his glasses up his nose. "Usually just in smaller, fragmented pieces." - hate to see the testing THAT one took. this story is just TOO funny. Jade's commentary is spot on!
Aloria 2008-05-29 ch 12,	abused'oh.. Jade, you REALLY shouldn't lie like that. it's mean. boo!
Aloria 2008-05-29 ch 11,	abuse"Speaking of which, an armaboar appeared and had apparently decided Jade was either trespassing, food, or trespassing to the point that the crime was punishable by becoming food." - those aren't all the same thing? lol "I'm sorry, I didn't know I was here exclusively for your amusement," he replied. Anise shrugged. "Well, now you know." And knowing is half the battle. The other half is getting to the nail polish remover to dilute the superglue before it dries and sticks Anise to you permanently.
Aloria 2008-05-28 ch 10,	abuseLOL! OMG Good one Anise! though.. Jade-Anise pairing is a little creepy.. he's over 30, isn't he? She's what.. 10?
Aloria 2008-05-28 ch 9,	abuseuhoh - something screwing with Jade's memory can't be good. Though... I suspect if it's got something to do with the Sentiences then he'll re-figure it out shortly. He's smart like that.
Aloria 2008-05-28 ch 8,	abuseThis was a totally awesome chapter. Your choice of challenges for the characters really reflects how WELL you know them ^_^ though.. "unsummoned" is not a word, "Dismissed" is more the word you were looking for. as in "Jade dismissed his spear."
Labyrnith 2008-05-28 ch 17,	abuseAll I can say about this fic, it was splendid and magnificent; certainly one of the best I've ever read. Perhaps even, the best. You've explained every subject thouroughly, and kept every moment of this fic interesting; there was never a boring moment. I've said this before and will say it again, it's a masterpiece. =3
Aloria 2008-05-28 ch 7,	abusethe banter this group goes through is so halariously amusing - you capture them each so well. this story rocks. totally.

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