Reviews for A Family Ripped and Torn

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newhi 2008-08-08 ch 6,	abuseRofl I guess I'll tell you here X3 I kinda don't have another way of telling you other than another review...not that I mind! I love this story so oh well >.>...love the chapter! Even if Torn did act SO MEAN TO POOR RIPP! And yes! I have...still going threw it to this day :3 But no biggie! Life is full of sun and fun babe!
Corad and Bijoux 2008-08-08 ch 8,	abuseAww, little Ripp-kun ;.; he desperately wants Torn to stay. With a father like Simius, who wouldn't want their older sibling there to protect them from harm. Simius went too far...I knew this was coming though. You're great a dropping hints, Grey-san. Will Torn ever find out how his father has been treating Ripp? I'd like to see his reaction if he ever does. That kid who kept trying to trip the cadets made me laugh. Erol sorted him out by the end of it XD Lesson in life: don't mess with Erol. Their instructor sounds dangerous too. You'd hate to peeve him off lol. Will Erol be defying him some more? That'll be entertaining to no end :D The ending of this chapter was sad...Ripp needs his brother :( Or a bear hug of some description (shifty eye) Sharok: Don't even think about it Corad. Corad: Think about what? Sharok: For the love of (smacks palm into forehead) Corad: This story sure is getting interesting. Can't wait for the next update :D If you still want/need me to beta read, just send it my way. Keep up the great work my friend!
Corad and Bijoux 2008-08-08 ch 7,	abuseI feel Torn's pain...I can never find anything either in a clean room. Ya put it away and never find it again...or you do, but then you don't need it anymore O.o Sharok: Maybe you lost your brain in your room too? Torn: I agree with that one. Corad: Yeah, I probably did. Most likely -.-' It was good of Simius to get Torn a dagger. Is that the one he has now? Luckily Torn stopped his father from punishing Ripp further. That man sure is scary sometimes. Have you done any artwork of him Grey-sama? I'm intrigued to know what he looks like :D And man, when Ripp shyed away when his dad went to touch him...another reason for me to feel sorry for the little guy. He's got it tough :( Great chapter btw! Entertaining as always :)
Corad and Bijoux 2008-08-08 ch 6,	abuseWow, who knew Ripp had a temper like that O.O I wasn't expecting him to start fighting that kid. And speaking of that kid, Caito reminds of someone...I've got it in my head that he's kinda chubby, but knowing me that ain't right. I'm glad Torn came to see the principal and not Simius. I'd hate to imagine what would've happened if his father came instead. Didn't particularly like the way Torn was treating Ripp, but I guess he had a reason to act like that. I just feel sorry for Ripp; being punished for defending his brother. It's nice that Torn started being friendly to him again by the end of it. We don't want him to turn into the grinch too soon :D Torn: Hey! What exactly do you mean by that?! Corad: Err...(shifty eye) Nothing...once again, an awesome chapter my friend. Great work!
Corad and Bijoux 2008-08-08 ch 5,	abuseMan, Juska creeped me out slightly in this. Her change in mood seemed very strange O.o I love the brotherly bond between Torn and Ripp; very sweet. It's clear they care for each other dearly. Heh, Simius and his hangovers...you've created a very entertaining character there, GreyJedi. At times I like him, other times I hate him for what he does to Ripp. He seems like a very real character to me. Nice work on that :) So, Torny boy's getting his dreads now? I can just imagine his parent's reaction when they next see him - not only does he have tatts and no eyebrows now, but dreadlocks to add onto that. I'm surprised he hasn't started getting piercings too XD Anywho, great chapter GreyJedi. This story's progressing along nicely :)
newhi 2008-08-08 ch 8,	abuseI knew it! I knew his father wa-...was GOING to hit him if he wasn't already! I just knew it X3 Poor Ripp...now I dislike his Father as well!
newhi 2008-08-08 ch 7,	abuseThinks on how Ripp's acting M...Thinks much like she once acted His is Dad hitting him? Or doing something he doesn't like that much? Or kids at sc-...wait he just started school, never mind that. I'm going with the Father hitting him thing till I read more...which I'm going to do right now! Just loves this story!
newhi 2008-08-08 ch 4,	abuseOmgz O: That's just like a fight with my best friends mom and her boyfriend! Love how you made Torn go off on them ^.^ Thumps up!
newhi 2008-08-08 ch 3,	abuseAw poor little Erol T.T Doesn't like Torn's Mom one bit >.>... you're great at this! I mean really! If you did the same for any other charter that didn't have a background I'd jump up and down with joy! You're so good at thinking things that make you wish NG told themselves in their games! Really you're that good! I'm starting to think I should go read more of your work >.>...Will do that after she's done with this story!
newhi 2008-08-07 ch 2,	abuseUm...yeah. I guess I worded that wrong :3 I mean I feel so bad for him I can cry, cus I know what it's like to live in hard ass times and have to take care of kids when you're still a kid yourself. That's what I mean x3 Great chp! Goes to read more
newhi 2008-08-05 ch 1,	abuseOmg! I almost cried for Torn T.T And...flipped out over Errol? WTF?! He was a friend of Torn's? O.O Nice way of going for your own fic! I love it! And little ripp sounds so cute X3 -Glomps him-
Privet Hana 2008-08-04 ch 8,	abuseI AM GUNNA FREAKING CALL CHILD SERVICES ON SIMIUS! HOW DARE HE TOUCH RIPP!>< Gr! That Chappie made me cry, gasp and be like WTF mates? Great Chappie Grey. But Can U guess who I am?:P STOP THE ABUSE! Privet Hana
Privet Hana 2008-07-31 ch 7,	abuseThat was cool! Whens the Next chappie gunna be up Grey? Well I hope its soon cus that was just cool...hhm Well Privet Hana OUT!
Emotastic Jessi 2008-01-06 ch 6,	abuseWonderful! I like it! Hope u write more. I just spent like 3 hours reading it. So yeah Grey, Nice Ideas for Torn and Ripp Cya on FAC!
Corad and Bijoux 2007-08-31 ch 4,	abuseI finally made it again. I'm really slow at reviewing, aren't I...sorry about the wait GreyJedi ;.; Another awesome chapter this was. I enjoyed the scene between Erol, Torn and Skinter at the stadium. Trust Erol to race around like a Lunatic lol. I felt sorry for poor little Ripp, having a glass thrown at him. His father should be more careful -.- The argument between Torn's parents was very interesting, also when Torn stepped in too. I like where this story is heading. You're doing an excellent job creating and working with Torn's family :D Keep it up!! ~Corad~

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