|Reviews for Love Knows No Boundaries|
| I 3 crack pairings 5/23/07 . chapter 1
Awesome! Do um...CloudxLarxene next! Or maybe SephirothxAerith? CLASSIC!
| Crackpairing lover 4/17/07 . chapter 1
Yay for crack pairings-desu! Suggestion - SephKairi. Or even SeifPaine? Just sugestions...
| Unpersonified 1/8/07 . chapter 3
Heheh... Nice work there, Koki-chan. Personally, epics are the more preferred type for me, but I guess ficlets would serve just as well.
'Love Knows No Boundaries' - a very apt title, I daresay. No matter who or what they are...
Paine and Demyx... That certainly is unusual. You've certainly kept both characters IC - something I'm well pleased with.
Understandably, in Crack! Pairings, that is a little more difficult to pull off - the setting often seems bizarre and the character personalities warped. You would have to recreate an aura of familiarity to impress upon the reader's mind that the written character is indeed the same one from the RPG...
Heck, I'm rambling here... What I'm trying to say is that: To make your character appear more realistic, incorporate a distinguishing gesture, phrase or whatever-else into their actions. Paine's "Hurt time!", for instance.
Ok, I know these are ficlets and I shouldn't be complaining about the length... but something I find to be rather lacking are the descriptions, which compose a good deal of the text.
When I read, it seems to me that I'm catching a mere glimpse rather than the full picture... Adding a pinch more dimension to detail would probably increase the depth of your stories, and make them a more satisfying read.
Anyway, that's my two-cents. Apologies if I had damaged your pride too much. I guess I could always offer more reviews in compensation...
A request: Roxas x Larxene. Not exactly Crack!, but way too rare for my liking. I was gonna write one myself, but my current KH epic's getting in the way.
| TurtleFeathers 1/8/07 . chapter 3
| TheSuperGirlOfDreams 12/28/06 . chapter 3
What about... Zexion and Aerith?
| silver moon droplet 12/28/06 . chapter 3
ANA is LOVING the PAN RIGHT NOW.
but on another note i bet that was VERY hard to write, but it was pretty damn good.
*random peace sign*
| Guest 12/27/06 . chapter 3
Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing that PainexDemyx chapter!
It was so AWESOME!
| TurtleFeathers 12/27/06 . chapter 2
An insane sugestion? Riku and Larxene. Yes, it is VERY insane. -_-'
| TurtleFeathers 12/27/06 . chapter 1
| Ana 12/24/06 . chapter 2
haha u know mine *grin*
it is cute
| Guest 12/24/06 . chapter 1
That was cool.
I love crack pairings...
Just two teeny suggestions...
Sorry...those are kinda strange...
Okay, REALLY strange...
But those pairings just popped into my head one day...
...And won't leave.
Anyway, great Job!
| fritzer 12/24/06 . chapter 1
hey! loved this! crack pairings are the coolest. just a suggestion...maybe roxasyuna? hope to see another drabble soon.
| silver moon droplet 12/24/06 . chapter 1
LEAH LOVES THE CRACK.
ya know that sounded really bad...