I liked your story. I've heard that song so many times before but i've never read a fanfiction to go with it, espescially a Draco/Harry fanfic. I really liked that you made Draco close his eyes while he was singing, because somehow it just seems to fit him (at least from my point of view). I liked the beginning of the story, but, once it got to Harry’s part, where it’s his point of view, Draco seems to get out of character. Draco to me is proud, cocky, has to be in control, and maybe a little awkward when it comes to love but just doesn’t show it to people. That’s also another thing I liked about the beginning the fact that he wrote a letter instead of telling him to his face. Anyway, when you make Draco and Harry fall, well it just doesn’t seem very likely. Draco was brought up rich so I would expect him to have a little more grace than that like maybe Harry tripping and Draco catching him or even Draco stumbling but to actually fall...? I don’t know it just doesn’t seem very probable unless somehow their legs get tangled up together. Also when Draco says “What are you doing out here anyhow Potter? Afraid I’m going to disappear or something,” I think you should write what kind of tone he said it in. Was he bitter? Was he hopeful? Was he resentful? Did his voice crack? Did his voice quiver? Did he stutter or pause in the middle? How did Draco say it? The same thing goes for when he says “Why? Its not like I’m some elusive snitch you want to capture, am I?” I know i might sound like some school teacher now but i think tone is very important because it gives us insight to what someone else is thinking. Also when Harry grabs Draco’s wrists what did Draco do? Personally, I picture him as flinching, or turning his face away from Harry, or even glaring at the hands while his heart beats even faster then before.
So yea... i originally intended 2 make this short but it seems i went off on a rant. sry about that, i just had to share that or it would bother me^-^

I like how you portray Draco. Not in a wimpy or cutesy way, still obnoxious and tough on the outside, but an actual person on the inside.
Wonderful ending!
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squee!
i love it
it was so sweet
at first it was kinda sad but the ending was really good

good fic in general, but one fact stuck out that kinda made me unhappy, the song "Last Christmas" was not originally sung by Ashley Tisdale, at all. It's an 80's rock song originally done by Wham! I believe.
but otherwise I liked the fic,

I absolutely love it.

That was an okay story. Too teeny bopperish for my taste. I hate Ashley Tisdale. The Wham! version is a million times better.

SSO... What happened to the necklace,? Dammit! I wanna know! >_< And bruises? Who hurt Draco? *takes out machine gun*

Loved it, by the way! I've always thought that Draco does have a lovely voice. (Must be cause Tom Felton was a choir singer before lol) but yeah, I love greatsinger!Draco. How you described him was lovely too, Made me imagine him as someone delicate, refined and beautiful... My Draco-love is satisfied! And gosh, the soft story and wistfulness of every line! Beautiful. Plus Harry's the dom. *laughs* Best Christmas fic I've read as of now. *goes off to look at your other fanfics*

Oh and minor mistake at the 'Draco laughed at Pansy..' Shouldn't it be 'Draco laughed as Pansy...'? :D

Once again I loved it! I can't help but love it you are such a good writer. I on the other hand can't do anything. Felt like poring my heart out like those damned Grffyindors. Put you have to love them right?

PrincessXXMoonXX

I loved it. Bravo, Bravo. It's very emotional and touching. I love it. very good.

oh kid, i'm only 24 but you just made feel really old! the story was good but it's not ashley's song, she just covered it. (i have seen her video - it is agood cover of the song) it was orginally done in the early 80's by the band WHAM!. George Michael is the singer. if you liked 'last christmas' check out 'careless whisper' i've actually read a good harry/draco fic based on it. check out the link below for info.
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so basically the story was good just double check any real world facts.