I like this story. I think you do a fantastic job at describing how Tidus is feeling and how everything looks around him. You are really doing a grand job on this. Keep it up

Nice work, Mura! Like I said at KHI probably one of the best fics I've read in a while. I loved how descriptive it was. It was really easy to picture everything that was happening. I didn't see anything wrong with it. I hope to read more from you. _

OH! How awesome. (This is Lauren from school btw-Oathy xD) Very, very good beginning. I will certainly keep an eye on this.