|Reviews for Hello|
| underhandlilies 1/9/11 . chapter 1
XD Well this was awesome...
| east-side-stories 4/22/09 . chapter 1
Hilarious. I loved the characterization of the people involved, though I didn't enjoy the leather pant thing...I didn't find humor in it, but I guess that's just me.
I really liked how the story just drew the reader in, right off the get-go. I liked the use of flashbacks and it was an all-around a realistic story. I very much appreciate the fact that you posted it.
I even made my sister read it, and she loved it too :P
| Amulet Strawberry 11/3/08 . chapter 1
Why the hell do I like this? I don't even like Yaoi and yet I find this fic absolutly brilliant! xD
| Angel-o-Darkness 2/12/08 . chapter 1
| KAWAIIwolf-luvr 1/1/08 . chapter 1
lmfao... the going back and forth to different times thingy was confuzing at first, but I liked it . lmao... GO LEATHER PANTS! Oh and by the way... that was hot... I just wish it coulda gone a little bit further .
| Marawr 12/27/07 . chapter 1
"I brought them with me" This was so fucking rad. At one point I was laughing so hard I hjad to leave the room to prevent um brain.,.. tumour or some shit like that. Then at the "Compromising position" bit I just happened to have a mouthful of water I'm surprised the keyboards still working. Ilysfm, your such and awesome writer E (Its a version of less than three, well thats my excuse )
| SLYSWN 10/20/07 . chapter 1
Brilliant in a I never read something quite like this sort of way. Cheers!
| Riku-Rocks 9/25/07 . chapter 1
Well that was certainly interesting. I especially liked the layout and pace of this story (and of course, the pairing is very nice).
| Eddy Leonhartslover 8/12/07 . chapter 1
I am so glad that I found this story again. I loved it and Leon in leather, makes me pant. Poor Riku though his mum is oblivious. Leons right it is in and out of the genes/jeans.
Loved this story by the way.
| Naomi 7/10/07 . chapter 1
Beautiful! You made Leo Y!(not that he wasn't before).
And an english Riku! S E X Y-er!
I loved the part where Riku's mum was suggesting that girl that she wanted him to get together with and Riku admitting his gayness!
Wait, scratch that... I loved every letter of every word of every sentence of every paragraph that you put in this brilliant piece! Thank you for sharing this, Archy. I wish you the best in your future fanfictions!
| Fatal-Love 6/26/07 . chapter 1
That was amusing,
British!Religious!Riku makes me giggle.
His mother made me laugh and the Vexen and Selphie thing made me in stitches.
Great job, it was a very nice read!
| Punkie-Spunk 6/21/07 . chapter 1
That made me laugh.
| namibami007 5/18/07 . chapter 1
LMAO I LUV IT
| pinknerffan 5/16/07 . chapter 1
leather pants...that's great
nice fic, i enjoyed it
| Chibi-Heartless 5/11/07 . chapter 1
LOL! Haha, that was funny XD...Riku's spoil excuse was hilarious! "It was good soil..." Nice xD...And Leon's low, tight, mot jaw-dropping leather pants...LOL! Hehe...and that FBI thing was really random, yet it was funny XD...I could so imagine him saying that xDD...Hehe...who would have thought about Vexen and Selphie...? o_O...Anyways, it was well written! ...