XD Well this was awesome...

Hilarious. I loved the characterization of the people involved, though I didn't enjoy the leather pant thing...I didn't find humor in it, but I guess that's just me.

I really liked how the story just drew the reader in, right off the get-go. I liked the use of flashbacks and it was an all-around a realistic story. I very much appreciate the fact that you posted it.

I even made my sister read it, and she loved it too :P

Why the hell do I like this? I don't even like Yaoi and yet I find this fic absolutly brilliant! xD

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lmfao... the going back and forth to different times thingy was confuzing at first, but I liked it . lmao... GO LEATHER PANTS! Oh and by the way... that was hot... I just wish it coulda gone a little bit further .

"I brought them with me" This was so fucking rad. At one point I was laughing so hard I hjad to leave the room to prevent um brain.,.. tumour or some shit like that. Then at the "Compromising position" bit I just happened to have a mouthful of water I'm surprised the keyboards still working. Ilysfm, your such and awesome writer E (Its a version of less than three, well thats my excuse )

Brilliant in a I never read something quite like this sort of way. Cheers!

Well that was certainly interesting. I especially liked the layout and pace of this story (and of course, the pairing is very nice).

I am so glad that I found this story again. I loved it and Leon in leather, makes me pant. Poor Riku though his mum is oblivious. Leons right it is in and out of the genes/jeans.

Loved this story by the way.

Beautiful! You made Leo Y!(not that he wasn't before).

And an english Riku! S E X Y-er!

I loved the part where Riku's mum was suggesting that girl that she wanted him to get together with and Riku admitting his gayness!

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Wait, scratch that... I loved every letter of every word of every sentence of every paragraph that you put in this brilliant piece! Thank you for sharing this, Archy. I wish you the best in your future fanfictions!

Naomi

That was amusing,

British!Religious!Riku makes me giggle.

His mother made me laugh and the Vexen and Selphie thing made me in stitches.

Great job, it was a very nice read!

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LOL. Herbert.

That made me laugh.

Great job.

LMAO I LUV IT

leather pants...that's great

nice fic, i enjoyed it

LOL! Haha, that was funny XD...Riku's spoil excuse was hilarious! "It was good soil..." Nice xD...And Leon's low, tight, mot jaw-dropping leather pants...LOL! Hehe...and that FBI thing was really random, yet it was funny XD...I could so imagine him saying that xDD...Hehe...who would have thought about Vexen and Selphie...? o_O...Anyways, it was well written! ...