Hilarious. I loved the characterization of the people involved, though I didn't enjoy the leather pant thing...I didn't find humor in it, but I guess that's just me.

I really liked how the story just drew the reader in, right off the get-go. I liked the use of flashbacks and it was an all-around a realistic story. I very much appreciate the fact that you posted it.

I even made my sister read it, and she loved it too :P

Why the hell do I like this?! I don't even like Yaoi and yet I find this fic absolutly brilliant! xD

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lmfao... the going back and forth to different times thingy was confuzing at first, but I liked it >^.^< lmao... GO LEATHER PANTS! Oh and by the way... that was hot... I just wish it coulda gone a little bit further >^.^

"I brought them with me" This was so fucking rad. At one point I was laughing so hard I hjad to leave the room to prevent um brain.,.. tumour or some shit like that. Then at the "Compromising position" bit I just happened to have a mouthful of water ^^ I'm surprised the keyboards still working. Ilysfm, your such and awesome writer E> (Its a version of less than three, well thats my excuse )

Brilliant in a I never read something quite like this sort of way. Cheers!

Well that was certainly interesting. I especially liked the layout and pace of this story (and of course, the pairing is very nice).

I am so glad that I found this story again. I loved it and Leon in leather, makes me pant. Poor Riku though his mum is oblivious. Leons right it is in and out of the genes/jeans.

Loved this story by the way.

Beautiful! You made Leon S E X Y!(not that he wasn't before).
And an english Riku!? S E X Y-er!
I loved the part where Riku's mum was suggesting that girl that she wanted him to get together with and Riku admitting his gayness!
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Wait, scratch that... I loved every letter of every word of every sentence of every paragraph that you put in this brilliant piece! Thank you for sharing this, Archy. I wish you the best in your future fanfictions!

~Naomi~

That was amusing,
British!Religious!Riku makes me giggle.

His mother made me laugh and the Vexen and Selphie thing made me in stitches.
Great job, it was a very nice read!

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LOL. Herbert.

That made me laugh.

Great job.

LMAO I LUV IT

leather pants...that's great

nice fic, i enjoyed it

LOL! Haha, that was funny XD...Riku's spoil excuse was hilarious! "It was good soil..." Nice xD...And Leon's low, tight, mot jaw-dropping leather pants...LOL! Hehe...and that FBI thing was really random, yet it was funny XD...I could so imagine him saying that xDD...Hehe...who would have thought about Vexen and Selphie...?! o_O...Anyways, it was well written! ^^...

rofl.

That story wins at life.