Well written. Beautifully put. Artsy, poetic. Excellent, all in all. Very good work.

Well written and artful in its depiction. I also stifled a sniffle when I read "Wind."

I liked it! I'm sure some people are going what in the hell is that supposed to mean, but im a lucky person who understood it.

Very poetic. Very nice.

wow...beautifully said

...nice...you're a really good writer. you should write more.

Heyy,
great job XD
Inu-midoriko loves it.

Wow.

Wow.

Your imagery is beautiful, and your language is amazing. After I finished this, I sat back and stared at the screen, thinking about your writing, which is amazing. You did an excellent job capturing the feel of the chapter (which I cried at), and still doing more than just describing the events. A favorite for sure.

Incredibly beautiful and wonderfully written. A true delight to read! The imagery was powerful and vivid and the entire piece resonated with feeling.
That chapter is one of my most favourites too. ^_^

"His eyes are closed, and she touches his face in the gentle way she wished she always could."- this sentence cries out to me in its sheer emotional beauty, and I love how you contrasted a few lines later with "...he leads her in the easy way he wished he always would."

An utterly sublime piece!