Holy - what - that was - wow. Best twist ever, lol! Such a little thing and yet it changes your whole perception of the story. Wow.

I just stumbled on this. Beautiful.

Ok, so you gave us a clue as to who was who but I was so caught up in the story, I completely missed it.

"I thought you and the Impala died together like Bonnie and Clyde."

See, that right there should have told me the author was Dean, & Sam was the bar owner. Thanks to my brilliant powers of observation though, I was totally caught by surprise at the end. Lol. :) This was an amazing fic. Thanks for sharing it. :)

Deans the writer? Wow... I never saw that coming... This is amazing story! (I really liked the reference to the pilot.

Oh wow... and here I was thinking the whole time that Frank was Dean! THat was really cool!

Holy crap, that was awesome. You had me all twisted about at the end, though, because I was so certain that Dean was Frank and Sam was Ervin. I'm guessing that was semi-intentional perhaps, though.

Okay, I am definitely adding this to my favorites list on here. And putting it in my favorites on my browser. And I'll probably end up reccing it on LJ too. Because it is just that awesome.

Very nice. This is another show you're starting to get me hooked on that I need to start watching soon.

This is a story that would be interesting to see continue as oppose to keeping it a 1 time thing, but at the same time I like it the way it is because it leaves an air of mystery to it.

Oh, I love that bunny who slapped you this time. This is GREAT fic. *hugs*

HOLY CRAP!

Omg...I thought...I believed that 'Frank' was Dean...oh man, that was...The End...what? No way...this is one of those stories that needs way more chapters. Please! I have to go read this again...whoa. Great job, awesome job!

for starters i thought the whole time the bartender was Dean so that was a surprised in itself that was really well done though

I love it. You have to continue cuz we need more of the back story.

That was absolutly great, thanks!

This was simply amazing!

Even though the ending was perfect, maybe you'd consider writing a sequel(s) in this universe? I'd love to see how the brothers reconnect after all these years and living such different lives.

I think you created a new story angle