Random but nice. Spontaneous of Squall to do that but seems highly unlikely but I can so picture this really happening I mean it's post game after all

Cheers

Keep Writing

Don't look at me strangely but this story was sexy! Great one-shot!

...nice purple button! Yay! Me likey! Favs!

XD At least he still got his warm milk! Hahahaha! One way or another...-gigglesnort- they only need cookies now. Hehehe. Nice one shot.

I don't get how this was hard to read. Loved the story. The part where she finishes off the milk and puts it back made me laugh so hard because I do the same thing.

Well...The Layout Made It Pretty Hard To Follow..But Is Was Funny. And Cute

Woo!

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nice. The layout wasn't the best and it made it a little hard to follow the story but nice piece anyway!

Aw! How cute. Nice one shot. Keep up the good work!

I like it. It is really nice and all. Goog job. It's kind of funny too.

hahahahahha kawaii! bravo. x

lol! that was so sweet!

when Squall kissed her i was like, 'one way to get the rest of the milk.' that sounded wrong...loll

cute story!

-rinnyheartillyizawesome

It's not bad. It seems a tad too short and a tad too rushed for my tastes, but it was a good attempt. The characters were slightly out of character - i'll never be able to imagine Squall falling asleep during anything work related... unless of course he was awake all night - and I wouldn't say the rating is adequate enough for this story. I'd say its more teen related, especially because of the ending.

Like I said, it's not bad though. I've seen a lot worse so don't feel discouraged from this review; at least you gave it a good attempt.

ciao *waves*

Queen0

Excellent story.

Short but sweet.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

PS. Merry Christmas!

oh God where do i start?

there were a lot of mistakes and the whold thing is clumped into one paragraph. it's difficult to read and you don't know what's happening when you're reading it.

the summary sounded better than the whole thing. i think it needs more work. i like the idea, it's romantic and quirky, but the presentation of the whole thing was kinda disappointing.

take your time when you're writing things. don't rush or everything will sound rushed and there will be lots of mistakes which we tend to overlook when you're rushing.

don't be mad if u find this review to be mean - i'm being honest.

please do reply. :D