well i am not the kind of person who would ead a story and say i didnt like this sentence becaus if i read it all i would love it all and is for i ideas for ending i have plenty (though i haven't seen DC from a long time and didn't even complete it) like:-
in the end the black organization finds out everything and hunt down everyone he knows 1 by 1 then he get engry and sad.. and for revenge he gets every thing he can do and then go to the organizesation and win but unfortanly he lost everything(love-his friends-even the detectives he know-and elementry ppl) and then he said i have no reason to live anymore and do a suiside.
or like
he cant take it any longer he tells ran the trueth ran get shocked and then she tries to help of cours she chages he way to conan in private but in publick she woudnt change and he get into a siteostion and had to go to the organize andran insist to acombany him he agrees(after a small talking fight)then she gets in risk he regrets telling her but in the end he saves her but he have to do it all over again with more burdens on his shoulder.
will i have more but i will send it to you later

Please ignore slight ramblings in the review I put in the other story. Exhaustion is catching up to me.
This is an interesting idea, memoirs based on different endings. I'll keep an eye out for any updates.

maybe u seen me comment on ur fanfictions(dont be annoyed, is that fanfictions of the same author...)

and this actually, is pretty good...

Not bad, not bad at all. I like it.

Wonderful! Thanks for contributing to the DC fandom.

Don't worry about the dashes. You should read my fanfiction; I use more dashes than Emily Dickinson! An idea for the translations, however, could be to asterisk them and add footnotes to the bottom of the page instead of using parentheses in-text.

I like this first person perspective from Shin'ichi. Though I don't entirely agree with the sentiment of Shin'ichi converting from egotism because of his time as Conan, it helps to think that he would focus on his flaws and the people he met; other fics go on angsty tirades of, for example, "Ran's years of separation and pain that I can never fully repair, etc." In other words, this Shin'ichi is reflective, yet positive. Nice job!

Here's an idea for a future installment: Haibara is never able to make the antidote, so Conan finally has to fake Shin'ichi's death and move to America. It would be very hard not to make that angsty, but please try!

This is an interesting concept. Hopefully you will also take some angsty turns as well. That means try some bad endings. I'll put this in my listings, thank you.

Himiko Azora/Ivory Petals

Great story so far, can't wait for more! Happy Holidays to you too. I have finally updated Treasure Hunt today, read it and enjoy, sorry for such an long wait. l8ter!


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