that...was...AMAZING! :D Awsome job! the plot was wxcellent. *throws muffins in air*


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that was great! I think that was an accurate representation of the relationship they have! GREAT job!

Aw... it makes me feel good inside. You know, I noticed with romance fics that they put too much angst and then try to make it up at the end with sex. I like your way better, lots of angst, and then simple gestures of love. Another good one from the PoF

That story was really good. Not too long at all. I always enjoy your works.

Lovely, just lovely. You pretty much hit right on the head, all the issues that I've always been interested in post-Naraku; they're really interesting and important issues to explore to in writing a post-Naraku fic but I've never seen it done this well. That more masculine side of Miroku definitely came through in this ^^ I loved how you pointed out that Sango loves the attention she gets from him, always thought that myself. And the Sango Miroku interaction was just great overall, their angst worked and it was funny once it all started coming together and Sango realized what they were both doing. Also I really liked how the title tied into the story really well.

dude i totally loved nice one

Love it! Though it took some time to read... but still it is wonderful!

That was sweet :]]
I'm too speechless to say anything else.

That was really a lovely story. It didn't have action, but you definately took down the concept of realism with greatness.

It's funny to see something as light-hearted as this story from you; throughout the whole story I was wishing for some sort of romantic outburst from Miroku to sweep Sango off her feet [I'm crazy for that, never leave me alone with Fluffy stories] but I wouldn't change this story for the world. You did a real great job of touching the MirSan subject without the usual Miroku character you add.

I just realised- This is the first time I've commented you..? Out of the past 14 stories I've followed, this is it.

I'm a terrible fan.

[Fury-chan]
First of all, thank you so much for this! ^_^ I feel so guilty that you put so much effort into this -procrastinated with hers the whole month (don't worry you're not my person XD)-but I love it!

VERY realistic, like I requested; I hardly ever see Inuyasha fanfictions in this style, so it was a special treat to be able to visualize everything to clearly. Also everything wasn't sugar-coated, which was even rarer and better; M/S was just a lot more meaningful that way. Moi liked it. x3

The lack of romance and action were admittedly noticed...but I'll let it slide this time ^_~, since the humor was appreciated and so was the character development, which I loved above all else. ^^ I was suprised at Miroku's effort to clean up; thought it was very sweet, and absolutely loved his panic

Sango was written very in-character and so was Kohaku I think, though at the end the way he talked sounded kinda older than he really would, but it got the point across and I understand you were probably in a hurry to wrap this up. ^^' Still, Sango's dialogue sounded kind of too formal for her and at times forced; Miroku's emotional speech at the end was kind of sappy, but again, got its point across.
I'm definitely reading all your M/S fics now; love the style, though in general dialogue could use a little loosening up; Kujo and Eiko were fun extras; OVERPROTECTIVE!Miroku is my hero. ^_^ JEALOUS!Sango was also fun to see too, though admittedly I think Eiko's kindness was more Kagome-like and didn't really fit , as she had no reason to be so kind to Sango. Still funny, though.

It was really lovely. An interesting concept to tackle, and done well. I like how you kept the characters natural in their interactions, and how well the dialogue and the story flowed.

One little thing I would bring to your attention would be the spelling mistakes scattered here and there through the piece (the word is "woo" not "woe" -"woe" is a regret, or sorrow.) Solidly good overall, but if you watch out for your spelling it will be an even stronger piece.

Otherwise it was absolutely lovely, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. ^_^

wow. simply amazing! I really loved the way you approached how each of them interpretted the proposal! bravo! can't wait for your next fic!

Aww, adorable! I love how you portrayed them and the uncertainty after Naraku's death; in character! The interweaving of angst and humor was well done, and... was Kujo's name taken from that psychotic dog?

wow this was a wonderful story! even through all the confusion and chaos, miroku and sango find their happinessa and kohaku is also beginning to recover from the trauma of being under naraku's control =)

happy chrismahanukwanzakah!

x3 Oh, you have no idea how much this had me squeeing. I love it when Miroku's protective of Sango. There is nothing I love more in canon than when Miroku shows off his less-than-holy side, either to blackmail someone (such as Hachi) or smack an offender off of Sango. Needless to say, it was very entertaining to imagine his facial expressions as he warned off Kujo. =3

Also, the Kohaku-angst was very nicely done. Very few people are able to write Sango worrying over Kohaku without making her seem whiny and pathetic. However, the interaction was nicely done, and I liked how you conveyed the example Sango used of the fish vs. the bandits. It's good for Kohaku. ;D

Miroku being confused and unsure with the Kazaana being gone was excellent as well, and Eiko was a cute little side character. xD Her lecturing Kujo was something I could picture Kagome doing had she been present in the story.

Gosh, I do love your stories. =3 I hope you know that.

And one last thing... Merry Christmas and much luffs! Enjoy your vacation!