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MooNBlaDeR 12/26/06 . chapter 1
... wow. i didnt expect to go for this coupling but haha wow... i'm actually quite fond of this fic now Yeah.. i was quite scared at first, but you just have this touch (rofl no bad ideas u!) that makes any pairing okay! XD rofl Hehehe *glomps* thanks for this lovely chapter uzu! cant wait to see how it goes
shadowedsolace 12/25/06 . chapter 1
Awesome writing! I'd always wondered how Riku'd gotten involved with all the characters he brought with him to the Destiny Isles. This backstory is intriguing and I can't wait for more! Thanks.
Draco's Worst Nightmare 12/25/06 . chapter 1
Aw! Riku likey Axel! That's adorable. ! _ !

That bus pervert really scared me. I was hoping he wouldn't get into poor little Riku's pants, but he did! I'm all unhappy for him now. Seriously, that was a crazy rapist moment. I wasn't even surprised that Riku cried...

I can't wait for more. I also saw that you're introducing a new story after all the updates. Do we really need another story to get hooked onto? Yes...yes we do.

Happy Writing and Merry Christmas!
katgirlofthenight 12/25/06 . chapter 1
Kya! It's everything I love about your writing. Humor, a few dark spots, the sexual insinuations... just AWESOME. I've been waiting for this ever since you previewed it, and you totally brought the love! Thank you for the awesome present, Uzu!
LadyJewel 12/25/06 . chapter 1
I am thrilled that you are writing this. I adore your 180-verse, and will continue to read anything from it.

You'll have more of this soon? Or 180 soon?

I really do love Axel and Riku's interactions. They are so amusing.

Riku in denial is highly amusing, too. Probably not for him though. He'll have plenty of friends soon, though, right?

Thank you for including Olette. She is my favorite character in the Kingdom Hearts series, thus far.

Continue, please!
Falaphesian 12/25/06 . chapter 1
M'kay. Wow. Where to begin. I... totally don't even know.

This has made it unbelievably obvious how much your writing has gotten kickass since.. uh. Well. I can't remember a time when it WASN'T kickass, but now it's TRULY kickass. It's like the difference (the devlopment, rather?) between fanfiction and publishable fiction. I'm loving how the descriptions aren't the least bit overkill, but the style makes room for those pretty little details- like the way Riku's hair hangs or the way Axel moves. Which brings me to Axel. Sweet mother of GOD, Axel.
Tofuu 12/25/06 . chapter 1
Awesome. I never really considered the pairing much, but I think I'm being converted into an AxelxRiku fan. Hope you update soon! (And your other fics as well )
Sexy Sora 12/25/06 . chapter 1
very cute story.. I hope he meets up with Sora at some point :P

can't wait for the next one!
Rosalyn Angel 12/25/06 . chapter 1
... yes. YES. YESYESYES.

This was /excellent/. I'm totally excited to read more! /YES/. Now, to go into more detail...

I love the last names you've given characters. I love that you've included Final Fantasy characters in the background. I loved the friendship with Riku and Olette while it lasted (and I kinda hope there's more of it). I love how you described all the attraction Riku saw in other men throughout the story. I love that Axel wants a jeep, because I totally see him in a jeep, too. XD

Riku's in denial, but he seems to be getting used to it. And the flirting between him and Axel is just TOO CUTE. Riku being all quiet and smiling and blushing is like the best thing ever. Also attracting unwanted attention like the guy on the bus. And the driver. Hm. I wonder who it is? And how will Sephiroth and Ansem factor in? Hm. Leon, too. Riku's just gettin' /around/ in this fic!

I'm loving the AxelRiku interaction. It makes me so, so happy; I keep smiling like a moron. And how Riku is envious of Axel's shameless, carefree being-I love you. :DD That's like one of my favorite ways to read/write AxelRiku.

I'm anticipating more detail on the interaction in the self-defense class. That sounds like it has so many possibilities. XD

omgosh. *heart!* I'm excited. More, please?

I want to draw Axel with a beret and ponytail. How adorable.

I'm eagerly await more chapters! :D

-RA, out
Metal Chocobo 12/25/06 . chapter 1
This is really cool. I like seeing unperfect Riku. Your writing is amazing as always. I hope A Complete 180 is still being written though.
Auron's Fan 12/25/06 . chapter 1
Wow...that was an interesting read. It's nice to see how he met (or is going to meet) everyone... And it's pretty cool how you mix in both FInal Fantasy, Kingdom Hearts, and Kingdom Hearts 2.

Sheesh... excellent chapter, and I do hope you update soon. _

Also... Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays, and Happy New Years!

Cheers,

Auron's Fan
Phantasmik 12/25/06 . chapter 1
Uzu, You just made my Christmas.
iodized salt 12/25/06 . chapter 1
Nice!

Update again soon please.

Happy Holidays!

xD
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