I think its good how it is. *shrugs*

I know this is an old fic and you stopped writing it along time ago but I think you should continue muahaha. Now i'm on your case about this one to. But seriously, I was watching X2 last night and thought of a great fan fic idea so I think i'm going to write one. And obviously it's about Pyro. And remember that one girl that I made up? Rage? I'm going to use her! But anyways. I dig this story you should come back one day and write it hehehe.

nice but sad fic so far! i feel for him so much lol! Pyro is in general a very complex character that there's so much you can do with him in any kind of fic even i u've got writer's block lol!
or u cud write on the development of his character and how he dealt with losing his family and then ending up at the academy.

the last thing u wrote was "And he had nowhere to go." that's where u can get into the RYRO if u like. u could write abt him and marie now since they're both kinda outsiders in general and they both have really troubled backgrounds (family wise i mean!). and we all the know that the cure wud only mean more problems as its only temporary. so since he has nowhere to go and she obviously is losing Bobby to Kitty they cud end up seeking out each other for stability, both really having nothing else left in their lives.

sorry that the review was so long but i know wat it's liek to be totally stuck so i told u my ideas. hope u get inspired [not necessarily from what i've said]and update soon!

- the darkness shows us what we're really made of...you are my darkness...i never want to see the light of day again for you are all the fire that i need - RYRO FOREVER!!

hey please update i think u culd take this story in lots of directons so please carry on x x

Wow, well I really enjoyed the first chapters. Please continue. I'm sure everyone here would be willing to toss you some ideas. I'm a huge RYRO fan and I know there are tons more out there.

I love your writing style, dude. The way you put what could be dozens of pages into a short, simple yet self-explanatory, not to mention awesome chapter. And how you keep most of the details too.. I usually don't like it this way, I usually like long, full of description stuff but you really got me with this. The first chap was really good. Poor John, though. I can't imagine what a traumatic experience like that could have caused him to feel. Can't wait for the third piece ;)
I just got one question: when you said this would have Rogan pairing, did you mean as lovers or just the fatherly relationship they got us used to in the movies?
Again, great story ;)

i think you were rather honest to the story, and i like the perspective you gave to it, not too emotional but enough me remind us. there were only two things i don't agree upon: JOhn is australian, not from Missouri, and what about the alkali lake incident? :( i would love some juicy details of when he decided to leave the events prior, pretty please?

i love your progress! good luck.

five? aren't mutant powers supposed to first manifest when puberty hits? or at least when they are twelve - ish? other than that, the flow of it was neat.

Made sense to me. It just gave a quick summary of the events of the movies, from Pyro's point of view. Poor guy. I hate that he lost everything. Sure, he'd been a jerk to Bobby and Rogue, but I love his character. I hate that bad things happened to him.

I love Ryro's. Can't wait to read more of this story. Update soon. :)

- Evening Falls

A really depressing beginning. But I like stories that start with a chapter from the past and then go into present day. Poor John, losing his mother. She seemed like a good mother too.

All in all, a good beginning to the story.

- Evening Falls

Oh no! How sad. If John's mom's face was black, i'm assuming she's dead so how did she open her eyes, was she alive? Great beginning. :)

extremely good start.
i like it a lot so far.
pyro seems very in character and the first chapter is his past the way exactly i would imagine it.
keep going!

My God, you're on a roll, huh? Oh, and yay! I got a little shout out too! Sorry, okay, moving on...

I really did like this chaper, you did a good job describing the relationships in it. Made it very clear, yupyup. But yeah, I apologize for this uber long review in advance...

-nervous chuckle-

"The three of them became what was known as the ‘mini X-Men’ around school."

Too cute for words. -smirks-


" John felt a powerful tug toward the darker side of mutant nature. His mother had always said he was meant for great things.

But then there was Marie."

I love that part. Honestly, I'm not too sure why though. I think it's the utter bluntness of it, stating it outright. It just really gets the point across.


"John hadn’t thought that she’d needed to apologize. Wolverine had effectively killed her. She’d needed to heal herself. And her powers had allowed her to do it."

Ooh, very in character, definitely. Sweet way of looking at his first impressions of her.

Yeah, kinda lng review, I know. Sorry 'bout that, I just like stating my fav bits is all. Heheh...ah, and also. The last line? Very powerful.
;)

P.S: Sorry for my compulsive reviewyness (and kinda, sorta crazyness), but yeah. -smirks- I'm...weird like that.

Well, welcome to the fandom, darlin'! Or...at least...I think you're new here, whatever.

But yeah, fantastic start, I must say. Very visual. Incredible.

So yup, update soon of I'll hunt you down.
;)

P.S:...I'm just kidding about hunting you down, by the way. Or am I? -shifty eyes-