that was really good. short but sweet. well done!
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Lol, perfect description of L! I like this; short, but very good XD

Haha, you know, I was actually dreaming about a swimming competition between the two...

Nice fic ^^
It's funny to imagine L's hair get wet n covers his face like seaweed like you say XD with his long skeletal legs n pale skin XD!!

Aw that was nice. and ain't it the truth there 'Ebony? Neither L or Light can refuse a challange.

Wonderful way of depicting L and Light's relationship.

Very in character, and loved the ending sentence.

^^

Keep on spurting perfection.

Haha, indeed! That seems like a very likely situation to occur!

~Sara

loving your prose style, a mixture of sweetness and sadness( somehow I feel it). hoping to see more of your DN fics^^

ah, the ending made me gasp. That's so good- what an interesting metaphor!
Heh, yeah, L would look kind of funky wet...like a drowned rat, poor thing.
Awesome one-shot

Great little one-shot. Enjoyed it. :)
~Mina~