 luna345 2009-10-16 . chapter 1interesting. you should update this one. i wanna know more!
-luna |
 Yomiko101 2007-06-05 . chapter 1Vampires, I love it, I'm not usually a Harry Potter fan, but yeah this is okay, it could work. Hope to see more! Update soon!
-Yamamoto Yomiko |
 Sapphos-Daughter 2007-01-10 . chapter 1Very interesting, I like how your original charater thinks and reacts. The Dursleys deserved to die, but I think she should have drawn it out a bit and really made them suffer. You must have put a lot of thought into her character and it really shows. It's rare to read fanfiction that uses original characters that are actually written well. Keep up the great work. |
 Mary Lillian Johnson 2007-01-08 . chapter 1(looks guilty) Oh, yeah, you know me, or you better! So pretty good, and just look at Moongazer7's, same here, and er, I hope gifted reviews, soon. Are you going to update anytime soon? I am waiting, but I can't wait. You better update or else, I will, I will, I will, get angry! Make sure you take care to update this soon. Bye. |
 leaving now 2007-01-03 . chapter 1Hey, it's Rachel! So, hi sam. Why didn't you tell me? Lucky, I bothered to check!, so it's awesome, and it's so didn't suck. Probably the best HP story ever. You earned favor to this story, so now I am addicted now! More! More! raises sign that saids More! More! More! Well, lol! adicted! Lol! better then before! so yeah! Lol! twin, and a sister, reckon this is the funniest. Lol! That's where came in, so I got to tell gifted now! Reckon, you should give her some credit, in your notes though. Lol couldn't stop laughing. Lol! I know you like said a lot, use other such substitutes like um, cried, spoke, voiced, started up, and more! I know you like to use the proper names too, and I suggest using some well chosen substitutes, like Harry would be the chosen one, or sam could be the sister. so yeah, great, update soon, You are not allowed to delete this. I band you from doing this! Lol! bye later!
Rachy |
 Haruka Tenou Distant Sky King 2006-12-25 . chapter 1You suck so bad! |
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