Brava, brava. You did an amazing job at delving into Daemon Sadi's character. He is a complicated character to get.

Such a beautiful story. Poetic...

What a wonderful look into the mind of Daemon Sadi. I really like this story. GOOD JOB!

Really, really, really nice! This is a great insight into Daemon's character and his relationship with Jaenelle. Beautifully written!

I really enjoyed this. I don't have any useful comments to add apart from that I think that you captured Daemon's character well and that I think that this little storylette is beautiful.

Thanks for sharing.

This is really good! No, scratch that. This is beyond good! It's abso-friggin-lutely fantabulous! You're an amazingly talented writer!

I tip my hat to you.

Wow. Wow wow wow. That was so sad and beautiful at the same time - loved it
lyradaemon x

o_o omg ;_; i loved it ^_^