ES FABULOSA SERIA GENIAL SI LE SIGUIERAS ESCRIBIENDO

ME PREGUNTO COMO REACCIONARIA INYACHA Y SU GRUPO

CUANDO ESCUCHARAN, A RIN LLAMAR PADRE A SACHUMARU

Y QUE PLANES TENDRIA NARAKU CUANDO; SE ENTERARA QUE

SECHUMARU ADOPTO A RIN COMO HIJA.

this is just adorable your frie4bnds at school are right this is cute

Aw, it's so sweet! I love it! This is going on my favorites list! I love how you set that up!

It was excellent, because you didn't make it aquaried, and made sure everyone one was in character.

I am going to check your pro, to see if you have made a sequal. I hope you have! This could make a good one of those on line series things! Whatever there called!

Keep this up and you might be added to my favorite author list.

One thing though, there were one, or, two grammer errors. But It's stil good.

Lady Alpha of the Eastern Lands

I loved your story. I enjoyed learning about the relationship of Sesshomaru and Rin.

awe so cute! its so adorable that you made me cry!

Your friends were right: this IS cute! :D

I liked this story very much! :)

It was so sweet! You did a good job at keeping Sesshoumaru in character. I find the RinxSesshy pairing weird, I mean, they should have a father daughter relation instead. That's what I like about this story. Please write more cute stories!

My-Kokoro

nice and sweet.

Aww...I loved it! Absolutely adorable, you don't really come across cute stories like this. I love them as a Father and Daughter! I cried a little at the ending because it was so cute. I love seeing the soft side to Sesshomaru-!

Yep, your friends were right. It is very cute.

oh THAT WAS SO ADORABLE IT MADE MY HEART MELT INTO A PUDDLE so well written and everythig a cute lil' fuff story needs

totally favs

mizuki

Yes, it's defiantly cute and fluffy.

I concur. It was extremely cute and well written.

OK, I'll say it... it is cute. I like this idea, the father daughter relationship...

AW! Kawaii! This is so adorable! Insanely cute! aw! I love Sesshomaru and Rin father/daughter fics! They make such a cute little family!

I also am one who cannot stand all those Sesshomaru/Rin romance fics, just, ew! i mean she is his daughter! Who would do that? She is his baby girl, and that's that!