that was soo sad! T.T

Please continue. Would love to see what happens next.

Hm...lovely fic! I really enjoyed this. My bit of advice: try ending the story with a deep thought or an elaboration as to Hoenheim's lack of a cure for Al's absence. Discuss its significance. That can create a very complete ending that ties everything together nicely! Great story, though!

poor ed! can't find his brother thats horrible! i still loved your story though.

*tear* this is the second angsty ed hoenheim reunion piece I have read...great job

Wow, good detail. Really love it.

~PT

Then rail I shall.

RAIL RAIL RAIL :)

I like it, short as it is. I'm not much better myself with chapter length. There's depth and a strong quality to your writing.

So sad...

Haha.. has your existence been confirmed yet? Hmm... yes it seems that it has...fourteen times over too...
Well I enjoyed this story and Hohenheim as usual.
Thank you for writing!

Fwa~! (wibbles) So cute! I'm a huge fan of the Hoho-papa fluff, so this really just hit the spot! I love opening paragraph the most, especially the line where it says, "the children who inherited his aptitude for alchemy and his talent for getting himself into inconvenient trouble." That made me giggle pretty hard, and I had to read the opening out loud to a coworker because it was just that good! Thanks for writing this! I'm definitely faving it!

please finish it or at least go throught the next few days...i love seeing ed like this...i dont know why but please!

OMG! That was so beautiful! Loved it, you write so well. Please continue with this story and update soon.

aw...this is sad! but it's good too!

really sweet. hope you update soon. ^_^

this is good and very in joyabul so don't stop here