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| Fullmetal Angyl 2008-01-14 ch 1,  | abuseThen rail I shall. RAIL RAIL RAIL :) I like it, short as it is. I'm not much better myself with chapter length. There's depth and a strong quality to your writing. |
| Bar-Ohki 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseSo sad... |
| Atemu'sLotus 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseHaha.. has your existence been confirmed yet? Hmm... yes it seems that it has...fourteen times over too... Well I enjoyed this story and Hohenheim as usual. Thank you for writing! |
| Shadow Mage Evelyn 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseFwa~! (wibbles) So cute! I'm a huge fan of the Hoho-papa fluff, so this really just hit the spot! I love opening paragraph the most, especially the line where it says, "the children who inherited his aptitude for alchemy and his talent for getting himself into inconvenient trouble." That made me giggle pretty hard, and I had to read the opening out loud to a coworker because it was just that good! Thanks for writing this! I'm definitely faving it! |
| NoZoMi17 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseplease finish it or at least go throught the next few days...i love seeing ed like this...i dont know why but please! |
| fullmetaldevil 2007-07-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG! That was so beautiful! Loved it, you write so well. Please continue with this story and update soon. |
| Harryswoman 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abuseaw...this is sad! but it's good too! |
| fullmetaldevil 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abusereally sweet. hope you update soon. ^_^ |
| REBD 2007-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is good and very in joyabul so don't stop here |
| Pink Pagoda 2007-03-03 ch 1, | abusewow this story is REALLY good...i love it! i hope you continue, and i like the fact that you've acknowledged. Edward probably would've been a tad sensitive to the climate in germany. awesome chapter and i REALLY hope you continue!;) |
| Azure Teriques 2007-03-02 ch 1, | abuseIt's really good, i love it^^ You will be continuing it right? |
| Crimson Masquerade 2007-02-27 ch 1, | abuseI live for Hohenheim/Ed fluffy fics like this, so this completely made my day. It was extremlely well written, and I loved the Hoho-introspective--it was realistic and ADORABLE! =^^= Anyway, awsome job on this! |
| Chibi Hayaku Hashiru 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseThe flashback is so cute! I love this story! :) |
| HisokaYukiko 2007-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good story. I have nothing else to say, but that i absolutley love it. |
| Beatrice 2006-12-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love the thunder scene with little Ed and Al. I like lightning, too. Storms are cool! |