i loved it but i thought the ending was a bit rushed~~ and i have a question.

if axel didnt know that roxas was that person why did he want to search far and wide for him when he seems to like roxas more?

I love you. Seriously one of my favorite Akuroku's EVER.

aww... that was so amazing! the ending was rushed, but it was so good! ah, i love axel and roxas, you wrote it so well! write a new story, this one was so awesome! :D

AWH! I love this!! lol it was soo good! ^.^ It took me two days to read it but I loved it! especially at the end with Kairi and Namine!! awh!! veerry cute.

omigosh! i luv this fic! the end was so cute! ithad, like, all of my fav pairings and stuff^^. cept i dont really lke a pervy/molesty hayner and tidus. but it was really good otherwise!

actually, ive read it twice XD

thanks for writing, dont stop^^
~dragonmisteress aka momo

That was really cool.

OMG! That was really good. I love how you have mixed old with new and woven in the Faity Tale. Amazingly done. Congratulations. LOL.

THAT my friend was just ADORABLE! >.

CUTE!

I'm amazed. xD You managed to mix kickass games with fairy tales and have only be a little bit corny. xD; My only thing is how fast they got together. Everything else was perfect~> >

Hmm, what to say...

Okay, I adored it. It really uinterested me and I just loved every minute of it! You are such an awesome author! I just can't put into words how awesome you and this story are. Great job!

aw! so cute!!

Wow! That was awesome =D It's been ages since I read a fic that was so long in one chapter. I love how you slipped some action and such into the story. And Namine and Kairi at the end were great

That's brilliant mate!
the only other time i read a ficcy this long in one chapter was about...uhhm...two years ago?
this was so well done!

-Mimsy

Amazing. I loved it. You rule.