I'm way off Christmas here. Blame it to my lack of a computer and starting school in a new country... Inbox is pretty much flooded...

Anyway, I really love how you begin the chapter with the little author's note. Do update soon.

Ha! Me likey! ^.^ Awesome job. I can't wait for the next update!

aww! yay for RoyxEd! really like the start out! hope to see mores soon

Ed/Roy will never stop being the best pairing in fma, because it's just so KAWII!! love how you've started it. both the prologue part of it and the intro to the prologue. very creative! XD

Cute. Roy's got a twin or something XD Can't wait to read more. Update soon.

Ou... this looks like it's going to be hilarious! Roy spoke too soon! =P

When I saw the alert I was like OOU! STORY FROM SEITO! You do some fine work!
One thing made me mad, and it wasn't you.
This was posted on the 25th. I got the review today, on the 8th... *twitch*

Sorry... hyper right now... =P
Keep it up!
~Mist

This is interesting so far. Hope you continue.

continue ^.^

sounds interesting please continue

Nice story update soon

I love it so far! Please continue. :3