i really enjoyed the first chapter of this story. by the date, it seems pretty impossible that you'll update it, but please consider it, because it truly is an excelent story.
just in case...

*puppy-dog eyes* I love your story so far and I want a new chapter. PLEASE? Update soon?

Bye,
Lisette

wow.very good story and i love your grammar almost perfect, you have to continue this really soon!

Ethy x

I liked it, good start. I eagerly await the next chapter

OH! way cool! Update soon. =]

Maid of the Mer

very good i reallyluff it so far 'tis spifftastic

UPADTE SOON PLEASE
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May your sword stay sharp

Good chapter. Addie seems pretty well-developed as a character.

Very, very good. You had hardly any spelling or grammar problems, and everything flowed pretty nicely. I have a bit of a question though: Was Addie's village of Yazuac the same one that got ransacked in the first book of Eragon? I was just wondering because if it was, then 10 years have past whereas Eragon is 26 years old and Murtagh 29? But, perhaps if Yazuac was attacked BEFORE without anyone's private knowledge then, Eragon and Addie would be close to the same age? O well, thanks anyways for your story, I beg of you to continue writing!
Madeline

Hi there. I like the story You are a good author. I just have one question: When does your story take place? Like what part of the books or is it after? Besides that, I have no questions. Update soon.
Signed,
V.H.