Wow, really good chapter. Glad you updated. :)

Nu, Kirby! I hope he is okay...good chapter!

Interesting development... the Dark Crystal idea looks like it's going to lead to some interesting story developments.

...it's incredibly easy to pretend I know what I talking about.

Woo! That was the best chapter yet! Lotsa description, awesome plot development, and NEW ENEMIES!

You are becoming a really great writer. When I look back at the first few chapters of this story and compare them to the most recent ones, I realize how much you've improved in that short amount of time.

Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)

YEAY! YOU UPDATED!

Wow, that hallucination bit was a bit scary. O.O Awesome job.

Meep, a cliff-hanger-type ending! Please update!

Good fight scene in this chapter. GO KIRBY!!

Oh wow...this story is intense. Great job! Dragons!!

HUZZAH! More stuff with Dark Matter! :)

Yay! An update! Very nice battle. I wonder what's going to happen to Kirby...

What is happening to Meta Knight??

Teh kewlness. You're connecting all of the games together nicely, I like it how you're putting in all of those legendary weapons. And you brought in Ripple Star! w00t!

Yay for the new chapter! I really like how this is going.

I see the idea of Duality-dark and light sides-in your writing. A well-used idea, can be done well.