Whoa. Nikki is way OOC but I like it. Also that "boo" part was too much. I was laughing my @ss off at the thought of Cameron's voice saying those words. lol

hm, the dialouge was simply unbearable sweetie. I had to stop reading it for a second. I love the concept of the scene though. Cameron almost being raped and Brandin coming to save him, but the way it was played out in the end was just not good. I'm gonna keep reading though because I really am interested in the story. xD

Sorry if I came off as harsh or unfair. :)

~Steven~

this was such a great story! i loved it!

I loved it. Can't wait for the next chapters in the sequel. February 12 can't come fast enough =]!

yea i loved ur story!
as it as ne story is, its even better wit a happy endn and im glad thats wat happ.
a sequel huh? hmm thats sounds good yet troubln at the same time.
I WANT A HAPPY ENDN AND THATS WAT THIS IS!

This was very good, but I couldn't help but notice that you put "Bradin took Bradin in whole." and I believe that Bradin is 17, and Camern is 15...?

I like this story alot!! Great job!! I'm still reading it, but i just have to say this...SOMEONE NEEDS TO KILL NIKKI. lol ok? I'm getting SICK of her butt! Shes a demanding, desperate, and annoying person!!

great story... love the pairing.. im about to read the sequel now...

omg this is better than i couldve hoped... and to answer ur guy question no its not wrong alittle wierd but not wrong (i know from experience)lol!!

~Peter

3 things:

1- Great story
2- I was picturing the parts very well. I stuck with the story because i keep picturing Zac Efron and Jesse McCartney! LOl.
3- I lovwe them both and tonight im probley going to have a disturbing dream of your story. LOL. Thats a goof thing! *) My whole week was crap and i read your story and i feel better now!

~Lauren~!

--dont understand when someone wants to have sex with them, and such--

huh?

really good story line. HORRIBLY WRITTEN. there is no sixteen year old or at least very few, who say private area, dont understand when someone wants to have sex with them, and such. also it just doesnt flow, but im glad you finally made this story line

omg i love the story so far u should rite one about two girls or somthin like that well anyways luv the story bye

hm i got like a few paragraphs in and had to stop

no offence but i wodent recoment starting a love story with a homosexual rape like it wasent even 1 paragraph in and this rape started

COME ON WHAT ARE THEY GONNA DO ON THE ROAD TRIP? COME ON TELL ME I WANNA KNOW (PLEASE?)