Aw... you made me cry. Shame on you. Beautifully done.

Z.

Like...WOW.

At first, I wasn't quite sure about it. But I figured it out quickly, and I really like the way it's written. I like the thought of how everything could have been different if you chose something different. However, it took me some time to figure out where the breaks between paragraphs were. Maybe you could do something else. Other than that, please continue writing.

these are BEAUTIFUL!! favorites are 4 ~agent abby!~ and 5. i neveer would have thought it.